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Five Years Old Again. . Temperature scorching The most beautiful day To idle away Sun smiled down perched upon my pew In the most vibrant unblemished Expanse of glorious sky That left one completely content And satisfied . I was by the sea sat upon a beach My pew Surveying the sights and hordes Of beach dwellers within my view People stretched out Soaking in the drenching sun While others played games And were having fun . Suddenly something captured my eye That made my heart smile For a while . Two rotundly middle-aged Ladies Suddenly stood up in bathing costumes Inflating them like balloons Facing each other They looked in each others eyes And without a word They understood each other and smiled . Suddenly the years departed They were five again And youthful hearted Then they turned And raced each other to the To the sea Like kids But what made me smile and a pleasure to see Was the fun look on their faces And look in their eyes Suddenly they again were five . Something that has stuck in my mind All this time We all have a inner child That longs to be free To have fun No matter who we be Life is for living Caring loving and giving Life is serious But it’s good To still be young at heart . I never knew who the two Ladies were Even today But that beautiful day by the beach I’ll always remember and won’t go away Had me wondering Were they sisters? Did they meet on that beach as kids? And become friends A halcyon story Without an end That encouraged me To pick up my pen. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Date: 11/20/2020 2:22:00 PM
what a wonderful story,we all need time to release the inner child, this is a great message:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2020 3:45:00 PM
Hi Jan. Hope you are ok. Thank you so much. , missed you.The moment reminded me not to always take life so seriously.Take care and stay safe.X
Date: 11/19/2020 8:49:00 AM
A beauty from your sharp and exquisite pen... I love it! Faving this friend
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:53:00 AM
What an honor. thank you so much, Regina. made my day. Strange how something that small, can start a chain reaction. It was wonderful to observe and taught me not to take life always so serious.Stay safe.
Date: 11/19/2020 7:16:00 AM
A lovely story Peter...yes.. our inner childishness is innocent and sweet.. and most of the time not able to let it out... that's life... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:50:00 AM
So true my friend as adults we are often too busy, Stress and life can get in the way.it's good to let our inner child out to play, even more today. Thank you. take care.
Date: 11/19/2020 5:17:00 AM
- We all have a child in us ... but, not many dare to let it out - Life is short ... play a little :) - A lovely memory, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2020 8:56:00 AM
Hi Anne- Lise.So true especially today.I always thought that parties and bars was where people let out their inner child.Thank you take good care. Pete.
Date: 11/19/2020 3:51:00 AM
Yes we do have an inner child and mine screams and shouts a lot.. Lovely memory, that encouraged you to write..
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Date: 11/19/2020 4:19:00 AM
Mine to my friend. I want an ice scream Blahhhh!.A simple memory a joy to see.made me realize, we shouldn't always take life seriously. have a great day. thank you.

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