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Five Years

The opening day I remember clearly. The last, I will treasure dearly. My last year was the worst I wish I could travel to the past. The happy faces from the first, To the sobbing tears of the last. Today, I opened the door to the future And close the door to the past!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/14/2017 7:19:00 AM
Profound, positive and nostalgic. I like the form, the rhyme scheme, and the title and your perfect closing line.
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Molly Pryor
Date: 9/25/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/13/2017 2:34:00 PM
Lovely sentimental poem, Molly. // Barry
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Molly Pryor
Date: 9/25/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Barry

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