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Five Minutes More

I wish I had that second back a minute ago. I wish I had that minute back when we laughed over a comic strip that reminded us of ourselves. I wish I had a basket full of minutes I could give away to everyone that wanted a piece of yesterday or tomorrow, or, would I be selfish and keep them all to myself? If I had five minutes, would I use them all at once or would I save one or two for some other time; like a stack of unread letters, would I open the best first or save those for last, to ponder in a quiet place, or would I share them with...let me think about that - and then I realized how hopeless I would feel. Could I go back and share them on 9/11 or the Boston Marathon or Pearl Harbor or Sandy Hook or Hiroshima or...but then I knew there weren't enough, there would never be enough to give back - and to whom anyway...? How would you choose who to save? I guess God would say, "Make the best of your minutes today and you won't wish you had them back tomorrow".

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Date: 6/29/2019 2:58:00 AM
thought provoking piece Craig hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2019 8:57:00 PM
Well done loved this Craig!
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Date: 6/28/2019 1:03:00 PM
I like the feel of this one Craig, it makes me ponder thoughts, if i could give minutes away, just five to a lost life so they could say their goodbyes, who would i chose....shame time lost in a day can't rollover to another day! Nice musing from your pen :) hugs
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Craig Cornish
Date: 6/28/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thanks Dear Sandy but in the end you're right, it would create so much stress to decide and how selfish would we be tempted to be on our own behalf.

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