Five Liner Doubled

sunlight
in the shadows,
silver lining the cloud-
forgiveness heals with whispers said
aloud

why me
life's plantive plea
yet one cry,one call
a choice open to us all ;Lord
help me
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Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:57 PM
lovely lines but I think this is a cinquain not a Quinitilla Brain
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