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Noble Souls Noble souls arise, build steps, forge roads, carry tough loads, scale peaks, quell fears, dream stars which blaze, clear those black skies. These souls would tears erase. Noble souls offer cheer, avoid wrath crush their pride, prove their worth, value earth, speak sober words, shape lives, plant hope’s seeds, serve other folks’ basic needs. Noble souls rally, never crawl, never stall. Their adept hands nurse other souls’ awful aches. Sweet roses adorn their loved angel faces. Noble souls exist. A poem using only 5-letter words Dec. 21, 2017 for Rhoda Tripp's 'Fem Bogstaver (Danish)' Poetry Contest

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John Watt

Date: 8/18/2020 1:09:00 PM

What a great command you have of the English language to pull this off with readability, lucidity, and a valid message about noble souls. Beautiful. Belated congrats for the wins and topping the 100 list.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 6:16:00 PM

Awesome, Andrea. The brevity of your lines aerates the poem most efficiently for an easy read. Beautifully executed.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/20/2018 12:34:00 PM

First place in the top 100 poems! Yay!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/20/2018 2:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/19/2018 6:33:00 AM

Did this win the contest? For see it has won the top 100. Good onya girl. Thumbs up real big.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2018 1:12:00 AM

Andrea, this wonderful favorite poem is right on top where I knew it would be first time I read it. Congratulations! I am so happy to see it in First Place! xxoo

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/18/2018 11:16:00 AM

Very nice! Beautiful writing.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/18/2018 7:28:00 AM

You know Andrea, I am going to give this a try. Have a niceday my friend.

Ingrid Showalter Swift

Date: 1/18/2018 7:11:00 AM

Fabulously inspiring...makes one want to "rise and rise" again. ("fall down 7 get up 8 " :) I had "stalled" a bit. This poem made me blush to realize it. Thank you for the inspiration to get back up

James Inman

Date: 1/18/2018 5:59:00 AM

Beautiful flow in this write Andrea. I started one for the contest but never finished it. It's not easy and yours is great.

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/17/2018 7:51:00 PM

A clever write, Andrea, I do like it, and congrats on being topster in the month's hot jots! Woo! Viv x

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/16/2018 6:14:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. PS, And you're #1 on the top 100 New poems too. Way to go:-) Alexis

John Fleming

Date: 1/16/2018 8:49:00 AM

My goodness, Andrea - what a difficult challenge! I would not have thought it possible to write any sort of poem (of any appreciable length) using just five letter words...amazing! My very best regards. :) john P.s Nicely done!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/15/2018 12:54:00 PM

I have chosen, these past 24 hours plus, to be a responsible domestic adult and thus I have not played poetry. I just checked out the winners' list where I found such joy to see your first place spot. I am SO HAPPY about that, my cherished Andrea! Love, love, love ... CayCay

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/15/2018 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea on your great win. Yes, they do exist. We need to search. Great message.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 1/14/2018 10:33:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in Rhoda's contest. I fully expected to see it take place.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/14/2018 6:54:00 PM

A well dissevered win Andrea! Your poem is simply beautiful my friend, Emile

Eve Roper

Date: 1/14/2018 6:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea! . Hugs Eve ~`*

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 1/14/2018 4:46:00 PM

Very nicely done. Congrats on your top win.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2018 4:10:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Andrea!:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/14/2018 3:55:00 PM

This is amazing, Andrea! You've managed to write a very meaningful poem that flows so smoothly with your five-letter-word gems! Congrats on your well-deserved First Place win!