FJ Thomas Poet Rhyme

Five Letter Words

Often women dream about famed lover sweet
While stars shine above mused quiet meets
Coded notes given neath party arbor
Eager hands which cause fresh ardor
These alter truth while love's fight wanes
Breed venom, fuels anger, solid bonds drain
Rings' blest oaths rival heavy chain
Death comes swift where wrong ideas start
False charm tears unity apart
After dawns first light sleep ought cease 
Madam casts aside bogus scene; finds peace


12/20/2017
Fem Bogstaver 
Hosted By: Rhoda Tripp
...this was flipping hard! lol

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J Hamilton Gist May 16, 2018 at 6:54 PM Much more artistic...the four letter words for sure! FJ Thomas May 17, 2018 at 8:14 AM Lolol indeed. Thanks J :)

Line Gauthier May 5, 2018 at 8:34 PM Belated congrats on your fine top win, FJ. FJ Thomas May 6, 2018 at 10:04 AM Thank you again Line. About to jump in the bath but I really look forward to reading some of your work after meeting. (aka church) :)

Besma Riabi Dziri April 6, 2018 at 10:34 AM A poet challenging their muse! A well composed poem from a talented poet! I enjoyed reading your poem! FJ Thomas April 6, 2018 at 8:04 PM Lol I have to challenge her or she deserts me Besma! I am so very grateful for all the time you've given me today.

Dave Timperley April 6, 2018 at 8:16 AM Never heard of a 5 letter verse. this is great. Well constructed. God Bless. D. FJ Thomas April 6, 2018 at 8:03 PM Good evening Dave. Thank you so very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2018 at 4:09 AM - Really skillful done, Shadow ... impressive - Congratulations I see it's a winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) FJ Thomas March 5, 2018 at 1:21 PM Hello Sunshine! Thank you very much :)

Eileen Manassian January 29, 2018 at 2:45 AM You surely are one to take up challenges, Shadow. I've been away for some time from here as I was sick for a week, then traveled to be with my daughter, then got back to give in grades, start a new semester, and I'm just dipping my toes back in the poetry pool again, but...WOW! I don't know if I'd be ready to take on challenges like you. Flipping hard or not...you did well! :) Congrats! Hugs FJ Thomas January 29, 2018 at 11:00 AM Oh I was hoping you made it! I hope you and your baby girl had fun together. You have so much in your lap; please keep your head up.

Gregory Richard Barden January 20, 2018 at 3:12 AM Congratulations on your win, Shadow - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-) FJ Thomas January 22, 2018 at 6:54 PM Thank you Gregory :) I agree on all points!

CayCay Godwin January 15, 2018 at 8:19 PM Congrats! You did an impressive job with 5 letter words. All the best ... CayCay FJ Thomas January 16, 2018 at 8:09 AM Thanks so much for popping in CayCay! It was definitely a new one to take a whack at ;)

Jan Allison January 14, 2018 at 8:26 PM congrats n your win Shadow:-) hugs Jan xx FJ Thomas January 16, 2018 at 8:08 AM What's up Jan! Thank you Lady :)

Eve Roper January 14, 2018 at 6:32 PM Congratulations on your win, Shadow, nicely done . Hugs Eve ~`* FJ Thomas January 16, 2018 at 8:06 AM Morning Eve :) Thank ya ma'am!

Rhoda Tripp January 14, 2018 at 3:22 PM Congratulations! Soup mail me regarding your gift card. FJ Thomas January 16, 2018 at 8:04 AM Haha but I've mailed you about even more! :P

Edward Mccall January 7, 2018 at 5:02 PM WOW!!!! what a splendid poem I agree with Jan you have nailed this one. Good luck in the contest. FJ Thomas January 9, 2018 at 12:20 PM Thanks Edward! I don't think I've ever had to work so hard for a poem LOL!

Jan Allison December 25, 2017 at 4:48 PM Wow Shadow you have nailed this one i found it such a challenge and your poem flows so beautifully:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx FJ Thomas December 27, 2017 at 12:15 PM Hi Jan :) I really appreciate that thank you.

Cheryl Hoffman December 24, 2017 at 9:18 AM Wow ~this may have been flipping hard for you but it turned out wonderful Shadow! Good luck in the contest!~Che :) FJ Thomas December 24, 2017 at 8:16 PM Thanks so much Che!

Paul Callus December 23, 2017 at 2:51 PM This is really good, Shadow...and, yes, it was flipping hard...I know, so far have failed to finish mine!! Regards // paul FJ Thomas December 23, 2017 at 8:07 PM Paul I had to go over it so many times I'm surprised I finished! Lol great challenge though! ;)

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2017 at 8:35 PM You are darn right it's hard. I like how you said that at the end!! Seems to me like you met the challenge just fine. FJ Thomas December 23, 2017 at 8:06 PM Lol thanks Andy!

Kudzai Mhangwa December 22, 2017 at 4:14 AM Nice poem, all the best in the contest! FJ Thomas December 22, 2017 at 11:31 AM Thanks so much Kudzai :)

Pipping Stars December 21, 2017 at 7:25 AM yeah you got the ticket here ... better than winks ... yeah ... this tells a tale ... this reader was in the midst of this write ... the word plagiarized fits this theme well ... uhm ... poodle poets come to mind as well ... yeah ... another words ... nailed it ... FJ Thomas December 21, 2017 at 8:10 AM While I don't quite follow your interpretation I'm glad that you got one of your own out of it. Thanks Molly

Supraja Kannan December 21, 2017 at 6:20 AM Wow...Stunning verse... Such a clever and wonderful write... Reads like a winner... FJ Thomas December 21, 2017 at 8:09 AM Thank you Supraja!

Alexis Y. December 20, 2017 at 7:23 PM WoW! And wow again. You did an amazing job with the 5 letter word challenge. It flowed well and the content was on point also. What can I say about your rhymes? They were flawless. It looks like you've penned a winning write. Excellent job. Best wishes:-) Alexis FJ Thomas December 21, 2017 at 8:04 AM Morning Alexis and thank you very much. That made the day that much brighter :)

Susan Ashley December 20, 2017 at 7:23 PM Shadow, this five letter word poem is absolutely amazing! Beautiful rhymes and intriguing content. I love your title too. A dazzling entry for this difficult challenge. Best wishes for a win.. FJ Thomas December 21, 2017 at 8:06 AM Thanks so much Susan. I was excited to try something I hadn't done before :)

Vijay Pandit December 20, 2017 at 5:51 PM You wrote this so well--it must have taken quite some effort--best for a win. FJ Thomas December 21, 2017 at 8:03 AM Lol way more than I thought it would. Thanks Vijay.

Harry Horsman December 20, 2017 at 5:16 PM Awesome poetry, belongs with the classics... FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 5:31 PM Harry that is so very sweet! Thank you :D

Joseph May December 20, 2017 at 3:13 PM Wow, you did a great job with the challenge...GL in the contest FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 3:22 PM Hey Joseph :) I think I got a headache trying! lol Thanks Joseph

Winged Warrior December 20, 2017 at 2:27 PM Superbly done my friend...quite difficult to accomplish...looks like you have the the winning touch...beautiful entry...god bless...*WW* FJ Thomas December 20, 2017 at 3:19 PM Thank you for vising Warrior :) I'm glad just to have tried something new!

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