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Five Letter Words

Often women dream about famed lover sweet While stars shine above mused quiet meets Coded notes given neath party arbor Eager hands which cause fresh ardor These alter truth while love's fight wanes Breed venom, fuels anger, solid bonds drain Rings' blest oaths rival heavy chain Death comes swift where wrong ideas start False charm tears unity apart After dawns first light sleep ought cease Madam casts aside bogus scene; finds peace 12/20/2017 Fem Bogstaver Hosted By: Rhoda Tripp ...this was flipping hard! lol

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 5/16/2018 6:54:00 PM

Much more artistic...the four letter words for sure!

Fj Thomas
Date: 5/17/2018 8:14:00 AM

Lolol indeed. Thanks J :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/5/2018 8:34:00 PM

Belated congrats on your fine top win, FJ.

Fj Thomas
Date: 5/6/2018 10:04:00 AM

Thank you again Line. About to jump in the bath but I really look forward to reading some of your work after meeting. (aka church) :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/6/2018 10:34:00 AM

A poet challenging their muse! A well composed poem from a talented poet! I enjoyed reading your poem!

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 8:04:00 PM

Lol I have to challenge her or she deserts me Besma! I am so very grateful for all the time you've given me today.

Dave Timperley

Date: 4/6/2018 8:16:00 AM

Never heard of a 5 letter verse. this is great. Well constructed. God Bless. D.

Fj Thomas
Date: 4/6/2018 8:03:00 PM

Good evening Dave. Thank you so very much!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2018 4:09:00 AM

- Really skillful done, Shadow ... impressive - Congratulations I see it's a winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 3/5/2018 1:21:00 PM

Hello Sunshine! Thank you very much :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/29/2018 2:45:00 AM

You surely are one to take up challenges, Shadow. I've been away for some time from here as I was sick for a week, then traveled to be with my daughter, then got back to give in grades, start a new semester, and I'm just dipping my toes back in the poetry pool again, but...WOW! I don't know if I'd be ready to take on challenges like you. Flipping hard or not...you did well! :) Congrats! Hugs

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/29/2018 11:00:00 AM

Oh I was hoping you made it! I hope you and your baby girl had fun together. You have so much in your lap; please keep your head up.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/20/2018 3:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Shadow - this was a very tough exercise, and I am honored to be on a list with such wonderful writers! Blessings, Friend! :-)

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/22/2018 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Gregory :) I agree on all points!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/15/2018 8:19:00 PM

Congrats! You did an impressive job with 5 letter words. All the best ... CayCay

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/16/2018 8:09:00 AM

Thanks so much for popping in CayCay! It was definitely a new one to take a whack at ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2018 8:26:00 PM

congrats n your win Shadow:-) hugs Jan xx

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/16/2018 8:08:00 AM

What's up Jan! Thank you Lady :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/14/2018 6:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Shadow, nicely done . Hugs Eve ~`*

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/16/2018 8:06:00 AM

Morning Eve :) Thank ya ma'am!

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/14/2018 3:22:00 PM

Congratulations! Soup mail me regarding your gift card.

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/16/2018 8:04:00 AM

Haha but I've mailed you about even more! :P

Edward Mccall

Date: 1/7/2018 5:02:00 PM

WOW!!!! what a splendid poem I agree with Jan you have nailed this one. Good luck in the contest.

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/9/2018 12:20:00 PM

Thanks Edward! I don't think I've ever had to work so hard for a poem LOL!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2017 4:48:00 PM

Wow Shadow you have nailed this one i found it such a challenge and your poem flows so beautifully:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/27/2017 12:15:00 PM

Hi Jan :) I really appreciate that thank you.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/24/2017 9:18:00 AM

Wow ~this may have been flipping hard for you but it turned out wonderful Shadow! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/24/2017 8:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Che!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/23/2017 2:51:00 PM

This is really good, Shadow...and, yes, it was flipping hard...I know, so far have failed to finish mine!! Regards // paul

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/23/2017 8:07:00 PM

Paul I had to go over it so many times I'm surprised I finished! Lol great challenge though! ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2017 8:35:00 PM

You are darn right it's hard. I like how you said that at the end!! Seems to me like you met the challenge just fine.

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/23/2017 8:06:00 PM

Lol thanks Andy!

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 12/22/2017 4:14:00 AM

Nice poem, all the best in the contest!

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/22/2017 11:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Kudzai :)

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/21/2017 7:25:00 AM

yeah you got the ticket here ... better than winks ... yeah ... this tells a tale ... this reader was in the midst of this write ... the word plagiarized fits this theme well ... uhm ... poodle poets come to mind as well ... yeah ... another words ... nailed it ...

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/21/2017 8:10:00 AM

While I don't quite follow your interpretation I'm glad that you got one of your own out of it. Thanks Molly

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/21/2017 6:20:00 AM

Wow...Stunning verse... Such a clever and wonderful write... Reads like a winner...

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/21/2017 8:09:00 AM

Thank you Supraja!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/20/2017 7:23:00 PM

Shadow, this five letter word poem is absolutely amazing! Beautiful rhymes and intriguing content. I love your title too. A dazzling entry for this difficult challenge. Best wishes for a win..

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/21/2017 8:06:00 AM

Thanks so much Susan. I was excited to try something I hadn't done before :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2017 7:23:00 PM

WoW! And wow again. You did an amazing job with the 5 letter word challenge. It flowed well and the content was on point also. What can I say about your rhymes? They were flawless. It looks like you've penned a winning write. Excellent job. Best wishes:-) Alexis

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/21/2017 8:04:00 AM

Morning Alexis and thank you very much. That made the day that much brighter :)