Five Fun Footles For Contest

He plays
She pays

Maybe
Baby

Next time
Decline

Headache
You shake

Won't look
Read book

He left
Bereft

Drove car
To bar

Goodbye
Won't cry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Wigley Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 1:05 AM
Good one, Seren. Well done. Viv x
A. Sharma Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Wonderfully done footles Seren! Big congrats!
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Thank you Dr Upma....Seren
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:16 PM
well done, Seren. congrats!!
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Thx Andrea ....Seren
Nance Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Nicely done!
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Thank you Cas.....Seren
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:55 PM
great story Seren:-) Congratulations :-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Thank you Jan....Seren
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:52 PM
deep ones, :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 5:37 PM
you did a great job with your story footles!!
Vaso Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 12:22 AM
Very good!
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 4:23 AM
Thanks .....Seren
Konos Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Excellent...tells a whole story....wow..
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 4:23 AM
Lol thanks .....Seren
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