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November 6, 2024, placed 1st in Eve Roper's Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Contest

 
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When Terri the Turtle and Henry the Hare joined Gary the Gator at the fabulous fair, they ate tasty green taffy, chili cheese dogs and fries, cotton candy, and snow cones. Then, to their surprise, they saw Larry the Lion and Shelton the Sheep having fun on the bumper cars, honking~~~Beep, Beep! They all rode the roller coaster and the Cruisin’ Carousel; then they went to win prizes and did really well. They won tall teddy bears and boxes of bubble gum. They were having a great time, so glad they had come. It got late. They’d grown tired, and their money was spent. With piles of fine prizes, to their homes they all went.

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Date: 11/12/2024 1:28:00 AM
A fun poem, congratulations
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/13/2024 12:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry. Janice
Date: 11/7/2024 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Sounds like it was a fun night at the fair. Did I win a teddy bear???  Have a fun day writing away.............
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/7/2024 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. You won a goldfish!! Janice
Date: 11/7/2024 5:07:00 AM
What an interesting time it was for Terry and Henry. They seemed to have thoroughly enjoyed at the fair. Congratulations Janice on your first place win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/7/2024 5:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Valsa! Janice
Date: 11/7/2024 3:32:00 AM
A fun read about a fun time! Congrats, Janice. Take care.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/7/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jim. Janice
Date: 10/16/2024 5:12:00 PM
What a lovely evening they had at the fair. A fabulous write Janice… Beryl
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/17/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thanks so much, Beryl. Janice
Date: 10/16/2024 8:00:00 AM
An enjoyable read Janice, love the use of alliteration. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/16/2024 8:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. The prompt calls for an alliterative nursery rhyme-type poem! It took me a WHILE to do this one. Janice

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