Huberta Van Akkeren Poet Footle

Five Fabulous Funny Footles

Old brown
Ghost town

Bright light
Scary sight

Severed head
Lying in bed

No fuss
Just us

 Old tale
Past stale

Just teens
Set scenes

For fun
‘twas done

Old tricks
For kicks

New moon
Too soon

New day
More play

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John Conde January 22, 2019 at 9:03 AM Thats a good 1 for shure

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2015 at 11:45 PM Congrats for the win, Huberta. I enjoyed the story.

Casarah Nance June 11, 2015 at 4:49 PM Prankster gangster, what fun trickery, nicely done.

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 3:21 PM This was very cleverly written - the syllable count was slightly out in the third footle:-) Congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A June 11, 2015 at 3:04 PM Huberta :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**