Lin Lane Poet Footle

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Five Fabulous Fun Footles For Contest

His Cheatin' Heart

We meet
  so sweet

First kiss
  pure bliss

Red rose
  propose

Vows said
  he's dead

He strayed
  I flayed


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 October 24th, 2016
  A Footles Contest
    by: Jan Allison

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Eve Roper November 19, 2016 at 2:05 PM Good footle, Lin, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Joanna Daniel November 2, 2016 at 9:33 AM This one was fun, Lin:) glad to see it scored high:)congratulations:)

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2016 at 5:04 PM You did a good one on cheatin' heart!! Good to see you on this list, Lin. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2016 at 1:29 PM - Congrats on your great first place in the contest, Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 30, 2016 at 1:14 PM Many congrats on your top spot Lin I loved this one and the pic is perfect:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman October 29, 2016 at 8:05 AM Poor guy Lin, HaHa. Lin Lane October 29, 2016 at 8:11 AM Poor guy my footle! haha Thanks, James.

Darren White October 25, 2016 at 7:59 AM Wonderful. And that cartoon to go with it. Hilarious :) Good luck Lin Lane October 25, 2016 at 9:21 AM Thank you very much, Darren.

Daniel Turner October 24, 2016 at 9:18 AM Nice one, Lin. I sense a little contempt. The sad part is, most men are pigs and they know it. Lin Lane October 24, 2016 at 9:22 AM lol Jan wanted funny ~ she got funny. I wasn't a victim of a cheating husband and wouldn't have flayed anyone, but the thought may have occurred to me a time or twenty. Thanks for reading and commenting, Danny.