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23.40 pm July 17, 2024

Five bare-chested boys Got bored of their toys Marched down the lake Without teacher Jake. Wearing their trousers They played four hours Under the sun’s heat And were tanned a bit. John climbed up the tree With the help of Lee When stung by a bee He wanted to pee. Sach and Ted wrestled While Andy whistled All stayed at the bank Safely making pranks. Five barefooted boys So hard to decoy Such valiant and smart They were all boy scouts.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/28/2024 11:46:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/5/2024 3:11:00 AM

Nursery Rhymes 7 Contest Judged: 10/4/2024 12:06:00 PM Sponsored by: Eve Roper Place 2 (out of 1-2 multi w)

Terry Miller

Date: 10/1/2024 1:28:00 AM

Love this Len, so nostalgic, congratulations

Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 2:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Terry. Warm congratulations on your mahy wins too. Sorry for coming late but I promise to catch up soon on your page. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2024 2:18:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Five Boys" write/story again. The kids will love reading this one. Hugs... Have a great day with your win..................

Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 2:34:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest poet friend Paula for reading this once again and your warm Congratulatory greetings. My warmest congratulatory greetings on your many wins too. Sorry for always coming here late. But I promise to catch up soon on your page ok. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2024 12:09:00 PM

What a hearty and superb piece this is, len...I like your children 's story and how it flowed...galing!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/21/2024 11:04:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting/encouraging words my dearest poet friend Nette. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 9/19/2024 5:59:00 AM

Sounds like a fun day overall

Len Gasun
Date: 9/21/2024 10:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Tom. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2024 4:15:00 PM

I am reading really cute nursery rhymes from Eves contest. Great job.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/21/2024 10:48:00 AM

Thanks for reading my simple rhyme my dearest poet friend. Thanks for the uplifting words too. God bless yu always and your writings. Hugs

Triny Xiang

Date: 9/17/2024 1:48:00 PM

I'm glad Andy was watching over the four boys while the Girl Scouts cheered them on. Such are the days of oak trees and bare feet lost to the march of progress. Pastoral and nostalgic. Thank you.

Len Gasun
Date: 9/21/2024 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your insightful comment my dear poet friend Triny. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/17/2024 11:44:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "Five Boys" write/story. Great Rhyme... Wonderful ending with them being all boy scouts. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away................

Len Gasun
Date: 9/21/2024 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Paula. Thank you also for the best wishes. I'm glad you enjoyed it dear. Have a fun day writing away too.