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Five Beautiful Lines

"Spring Is Coming Alive With My Five Senses." Quote By Poet

I see the beautiful spring flowers blooming.
I feel the new day's sun upon my face.
I taste the fresh red juicy strawberries.
I touch the soft brown baby bunny.
I smell the rain after the day has been watered.

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Valsa George Date: 3/20/2025 3:07:00 AM Dear Paula, back to your sweet poem with congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/20/2025 10:25:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Five Beautiful Lines" write again. Always good to see you here. Spring will be here soon, so enjoy it. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:17:00 AM "2 Place" Five Beautiful Lines~Date Written: 3/12/2025~written By Human Poet..... Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 3/15/2025 6:25:00 AM Paula, it's easy to see what this is a winner! I loved it and the soft, fresh feeling that your words imparted! happy Saturday xxoo Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:31:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. It was so much fun to bring to life. Happy Sunday To You... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2025 2:37:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:29:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read, write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring is coming fast so enjoy it. Hugs... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

thriveni c mysore Date: 3/15/2025 2:35:00 AM back to congratulate and meet brown bunny once again. congratulations on your win dear friend. cheers!!! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:28:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read, write and for your Congratulations. Always great to see you here. I don't know about you but I have seen enough of this AI bunny. Be Gone Bunny.... Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write again. Have a great Sunday with cheers.... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Anne E Sangster - K Date: 3/14/2025 8:40:00 PM Absolutely beautiful Paula. A delightful read for me tonight. Bring on the spring! Big smiles & hugs~Anne :-) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:23:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Absolutely beautiful. Spring is a beautiful time of the year and I love it. Hugs... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

thriveni c mysore Date: 3/14/2025 6:40:00 PM beautiful lines, beautiful thoughts,I will be back to congratulate dear friend. happy writing. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:22:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, beautiful lines, beautiful thoughts. It was fun to bring to life. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Sotto Poet Date: 3/14/2025 6:35:00 PM Paula, your poem seems fascinating. A terrific idea that makes perfect sense. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:20:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. I enjoyed writing this fun Spring write. Spring is coming fast so enjoy it... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

John Read Date: 3/14/2025 1:50:00 PM Hi Paula your poem sums up spring beautifully. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/15/2025 10:19:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring is coming fast so enjoy it... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 3/14/2025 7:07:00 AM Great. Makes a lot of sense. Kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 12:25:00 PM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Great. It was fun to write. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

David Crandall Date: 3/13/2025 5:50:00 PM They all sound great, but my favorites are juicy strawberries in the sun! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 12:24:00 PM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, juicy red strawberries are wonderful. I Love Them... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Hiba Junaid Date: 3/13/2025 8:03:00 AM This poem is just lovely. I could feel the tactile imagery with my own five senses. Very beautiful. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 12:22:00 PM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Very beautiful. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/13/2025 7:23:00 AM Dear Paula, I loved this delightful sensory journey through spring's beauty. You've created the sights, feelings, tastes, touches, and scents of the season in a way that feels both personal and universal. It's a joy to experience the world through your words. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 12:21:00 PM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring will be here soon with many new sights, feelings, tastes, touches, and scents to enjoy... Hooray!!! Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Len Gasun Date: 3/13/2025 2:38:00 AM A gorgeous 5 lined poem with such a beautiful image that satiates all my senses too my dear poet friend Paula. Very creative my dear poet friend. I love it and immensely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 12:02:00 PM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Very creative. Also glad you love it. God bless you. Hugs.... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Valsa George Date: 3/12/2025 9:53:00 PM All five senses are satisfied. Lovely poem. Spring brings such beautiful experiences in life. All the best in the contest, dear Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:59:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read, write and for All the best in the contest. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be a, Lovely poem. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/12/2025 8:48:00 PM What a pretty and uplifting read! CayCay Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:57:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, a pretty and uplifting read. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/12/2025 7:10:00 PM Truly beautiful, Paula!! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:56:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, Truly beautiful. Now I am wearing a smile. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Unseeking Seeker Date: 3/12/2025 7:06:00 PM What a beautiful picture of Spring you’ve painted, Paula, enjoyed your five senses write Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:53:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, words can paint a picture. You make me very happy saying, I did that for you. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Michael Tor Date: 3/12/2025 5:20:00 PM Love your five senses write Dear Paula. So enjoyed how you wrote this... God bless you... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:50:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Spring will be here soon. God bless you.... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Yann Rolland Date: 3/12/2025 4:48:00 PM delicious poetry, i can feel alive and vibrating with your beautiful poem, thank you so much Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:48:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" to be, delicious poetry. It was fun to bring to life. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/12/2025 4:17:00 PM Awesome idea. Using the five senses! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:45:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you found my "Five Beautiful Lines" write to be an, Awesome idea. It was fun to write. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Heidi Sands Date: 3/12/2025 3:29:00 PM I love how you wrote this describing the senses. Happy Spring! :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:44:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you love my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, Happy Spring to you. Hugs... Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/12/2025 1:04:00 PM Wow! You bring is in touch with God’s creation in a very beautifully earthy fashion. Rain..my all time favorite Gracias, Pangie 10:30 a.m Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:42:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. I see WOW and FAV??? Thanks a million. You have made my day a very happy one. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/12/2025 12:15:00 PM Sounds like a lovely day, Paula! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:38:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read and write. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. Yes, it was a lovely day to write this one. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/12/2025 11:44:00 AM You use the five senses to display a beautiful poem. Best for a win. Blessings. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2025 11:35:00 AM Thanks for stopping to read, write and for Best for a win. Glad you enjoyed my "Five Beautiful Lines" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Let's use our Five Senses as we write away..........

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