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Fitting In

I enter the hall
wondering where to sit.
People stare.
I spot an open seat
and immediately drop into it.
Relief flows through me.
I’m a part of the crowd.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 26, 2009 at 6:46 AM

What a relief when we do spot a seat. Always feel at ease after I sit. Outstanding write. Love, Carol

July 18, 2009 at 2:48 PM

There is so much depth in this poem. I think we all like the feeling of fitting in. You captured the emotion of this experience well in this one. Keep on writing! Love you, Mom

Yvette Deem

July 12, 2009 at 10:44 PM

oh i do know this feeling well. brings me back to high school. love it, great job . and thank for the kind comments on my work. yvette

John Freeman

July 4, 2009 at 12:12 PM

Blending in, is not a sin, but self is lost in the end! A lovely person is who you are, please try driving Love's car! jm

Diane Christian

July 4, 2009 at 11:57 AM

a powerful write, maybe the people staring like what they see or they could just be simply jellous of course, if peopel stared at my sister lesley she used to come right out with it and ask do you want a photo, God bless you from diane