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Fishing for More Pie

More so, was the knife in the pan. A slice, another; a fisherman. Before rest of us, With granddad finesse, A pie, in his sights - his game plan.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 1:55 PM
So cute, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2026 at 2:55 PM
lol…Thanks! Happy New Year!
Wolf Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 8:33 PM
This ain't 'pie in the sky.' Looks scrumptious to me.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Makes one’s mouth water, eh?
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:11 PM
another delightful holiday read. Enjoy your new year's eve, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Thank you, dear one!
DiMino Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Wonderful imagery. What the heck...he earned it over a lifetime. A glass of brandy to wash it down. One cigar maybe. Have a great New Year's Eve my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 12:29 PM
LOL! Guess so! Thanks for your insight and HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Hind Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 5:07 PM
LOL I want some, :P
Hind Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 8:03 PM
:D
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Okay, a bite…lol
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 9:59 AM
A fun write for a great picture. Can I have a slice from the picture??? Hahaha!!! Hope You Have a Very Blessed New Year 2026 writing away...............
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 10:02 AM
If he didn’t eat the whole pie ;) Hugs
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