Fishing Days

It’s 5 am, we sneak out of the house
My brother and I, as quiet as a mouse
To his red bike, where I sit on the cross bar
Trusting my brother, we won’t go too far.

Put the worm on the hook, wrap it round well
Or it will wiggle off, and the fish it will tell
Watch the float as it bobs, and pull it in gent-ly
That how my brother taught fishing to me.

Always sneaking out, fishing in the dark
Racing on his red bike, we thought it a lark.
He made me dig up the worms, for the fishing bait
But I wouldn’t squeal, no, that was never my fate

Holding both fishing rods, I hung on real tight
He promised he would teach me to use it just right. 
In the river we found we loved to fish best
Often paddling in water right up to our chest.

My brother, he stopped taking me fishing with him
I always caught the fish; he said it was a sin.
Then came the day girls were more interesting than fish
Our fishing days were over, it was never my wish.

So anyone with a rod that they will let me use
I’ll sit on your crossbar, or saddle if you choose
Teach me to fish and to cast it with skill
And I’ll get your worms up, I promise I will.

© ~GG~ 14/11/2012
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Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 11:20 AM
yours was so adorable. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 11:21 AM
thanks Andy, my brother was quite adorable too lol xx
Nair Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 7:49 AM
Mandy, Congrats, this one is superb!! Jag
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go...Sara
Richards Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 2:27 PM
What a cute story this is, Mandy!! Congratulations!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 3:56 AM
Thanks Carrie love and all true xx
May Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 5:33 AM
congrats on a great win Mandy
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Thanks Joseph xx
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place in my contest...Seren
A   Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 8:19 PM
MandyStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
Anish Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 12:44 PM
Enjoyable verse! I would like to go fishing again myself. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 11:58 PM
cute cute cute, Mandy!!! Yep, I took some health store pills today but what I really need are those pain killer meds they won't prescribe to people unless you just got out of surgery. ahahaha. LUv, Andrea
Martin Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 5:42 PM
Very interestingly stated!! Enjoyed reading!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 12:44 AM
thanks Jim xx
Horsman Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 2:56 PM
wow, again a story in a poem, which just draws one in and lives every word.. just love this, good luck in contest... P.S have you wrote something similar to this before, i wonder?
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 3:31 PM
no not that I recall xx
Harrell Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Lol, too cute, Mandy.
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