Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Limerick

Fishing Adventure

    "Fishing Adventure"



fishing is a sport of supreme relaxation
beneath golden Sun with great anticipation
while warm water is quiet
fish feast on worm diet
as the boat gently sways in utter fascination.

soon the fishing pole jerks on thin line
a sweet catch on which two hearts will dine
once a struggle ensues
other fish sing the blues
top things off with a bottle of wine.

surprise this fish was a white shark sea beast
run for your life, no fish feast
jaws revisited blue wave
adventure in a cold cave
lived to tell this tale of terror, at least.


*For Seren Robert's Fisherman Contest.
*Dec. 1, 2012. 

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 3:27 AM wonderful adventure... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 16, 2012 at 3:30 AM WON 5TH PLACE .. THANKXX

Sara Kendrick December 15, 2012 at 10:19 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 14, 2012 at 2:01 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Linda love xx

Seren Roberts December 13, 2012 at 10:35 PM Congratulations on your placement in my contest.....Seren

Sara Kendrick December 2, 2012 at 6:31 AM Scary catching those sharks or sting rays..Great work that reads like a winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you are back up and running..Sara

Kash Poet December 2, 2012 at 5:06 AM Haha enjoyed the ending very much Linda.Very nice Limericks!

David Williams December 2, 2012 at 2:35 AM Linda-Marie great tale you told here, I love fishing it is so relaxing....David

Russell Sivey December 1, 2012 at 9:59 PM I really liked the first Limerick, it was very well put together! I believe that this write will do extremely well in the contest! I loved reading this incredibly enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful rendition of a fishing trip gone awry! I hate it when I catch a shark, yikes! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem my friend! What fun it was to read, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 1, 2012 at 9:40 PM years ago we used to go fishing quite a lot .. now just down seashore now and then .. but still enjoy ..