Fishin' With Grandpa

The little boy came in that sunny day,
After many hours of tiring play.
He said to his grandpa, “Papa, something’s missin’.”
“Can we, please, soon, go fishin’?”

Grandpa responded without blinking an eye,
“We’ll not let another day go by.”
“Go, get your pole!” and “Put on some shoes”,
“Day’s almost gone, and those fish we might lose.”

They hurried together to the little pond’s side,
Hoping that the fish were not now going to hide.
As he dropped his line into the muddy pond,
A big fish almost immediately did respond.

The afternoon quickly faded away,
And back to home, they had ended their day.
Though no other fish was, that day, caught,
A closeness developed that could never be bought.

And now as grandpa continues to mature,
There’s one thing not forgotten, that’s for sure.
That day with a little one so long ago,
Is worth more than anyone will ever know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:01 AM
What a great memory! Conrad's on your win. Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:01 AM
What a great memory! Conrad's on your win. Light & Love
Rodgers Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Congrats on catching a big win
Martin Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Thanks!! Glad you liked it...Jim
Beam Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:30 AM
congrats on win Jim
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Thanks John!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 5:02 PM
yes, I see no fun in fishing but for getting to know someone better and just sitting there to talk, it must be a very nice thing. Congrats for your win.
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Andrea!! I appreciate your comments...Jim
Hamilton Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 6:02 AM
love this poem Dr Jim congrats on win hugs
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Shadow!! Glad you liked it....Jim
A. Sharma Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 4:43 AM
Great write Dr. Jim ! Congrats on wonderful win !
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma!! Glad you liked it...Jim
Mehta Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Enjoyed your write on fishing and congrats on the win, Dr. Jim
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram! I paareciate your comments...Jim
Gorelick Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 10:28 PM
Great and sentimental story..congrats on your win..BG
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Barbara! Glad you liked it...Jim
Kos Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Very admirable poem. Congratulations on your win, sir.
Martin Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Ivo!! Glad you liked it...Jim
Dillard Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:02 PM
I had a similar experience with my Granddaddy. I won't forget it either. Congratulations! RAY
Martin Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Thank you Ray!! I appreciate your comments...Jim
Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 5:09 PM
sweet remembrances of moments through fishing, dr. jim.. sweets congrats on your shining win!.. huggs
Martin Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Thanks Nette!!Glad liked it...Jim
A   Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Dr Jim, nice of you to share, the warm moment and moments.... Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
Martin Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:40 PM
thanks Linda!! Glad you liked it....Jim
Kendrick Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara
Martin Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Sara! It is a nice surprise! Jim
Owen Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 2:24 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Very nice write and I love the image that comes along with this!
Martin Avatar
December 15, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Thanks a bunch Nicole! I was surprised with the 1st place win (but I'll take it, lol) Jim
Song Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 5:33 PM
What a classy write and a super well-deserved win!!! Applause for this wonderful poem. gwendolen
Martin Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 5:37 PM
Thank you Gwendolen. I appreciate your kind remarks! Jim
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December 14, 2012 at 1:50 AM
Hi there Jim, congratulations on your joint top spot, a well deserved win xx
Martin Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate hearing from you! Jim
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Congratulations in joint first place in my contest....Seren
Martin Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Thank you very much. Glad you liked it! Jim
Roske Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 9:20 AM
recalling fond memories of fishing trips with my Grandpa - enjoyed this piece
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