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For Bitesize 120 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

Fish Tank

I placed a fish into a tank.
Would it float or would it sank?
A fish has its own volition - 
each one on a separate mission.
Some will to the bottom, drop.
Others will rise up to the top.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Aldana Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 9:29 PM
• I Love Your Rhyming Poetry • Bookmarked My Favorite Poem • You're Definitely An Artist • I Must Follow You • Adorable • Funny • Short & Sweet • Entertaining • Enjoyable
Crandall Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Thanks Key - great to hear!
Baker Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Catchy wordplay and a fun poem, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Crandall Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 12:08 PM
Thanks Bill!
Crandall Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Bill!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 3:38 PM
love the subtle metaphor here. Well done! Faving, Sara
Crandall Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Hi - thanks Sara!
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