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Fish Tales

There once was a mermaid named Lily Who wanted a life that was frilly She made a rash wish To not be a fish With those fishtail legs she looks silly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 6:53:00 AM
Excellent piece here, original Déirdre Ó Maidín
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:00:00 PM
THis is really really good, Marty, and I say that in all sincerity because I rarely like more than half the limericks I read anywhere. It's a sure winner as well, or (as one person has said here) there is a fly in the "soup". haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:52:00 AM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. Thanks for the day brightener. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:18:00 AM
Clever piece , Marty and best of luck in the contest .....
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:15:00 PM
Most enjoyed reading. Very silly. Nice one....
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:55:00 PM
Luv it.. good luck in the contest.. just entered myself.... Whale Tale ... luv.."Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:48:00 PM
Big laugh................thanks it was great!
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