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Fish n Taties

He knew all there was to know About the frying game Haddock, cod, skate and ling All treated just the same. A deft flick of the wrist to draw Each piece through the batter Then the basket lowered into The hot oil’s spit and splatter. A basket full chips Placed alongside For food of the gods Quickly deep fried. Well wrapped in clean paper When the order was complete Or the wrapping left open To be eaten on the street. Salt pepper vinegar To add to the flavour Giving a hot meal for Any person to savour. Sits well on top of pints Calms a stomach down Known to all and sundry as The best chippie in town. The third generation Carrying on from his dad A point he emphasised When he ran his local ad. Proudly above his shop was Displayed his family name And they knew all there was To know about the frying game.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/31/2024 3:24:00 PM

Terry In response to a request from my friend Wen, I am grateful for stumbling upon your page and immersing myself in the delightful poem that celebrates the art and heritage of a family-operated chip shop. The poem eloquently captures the essence of frying various types of fish and chips, showcasing the dedication and mastery required to run a successful establishment. Through carefully chosen words like "deft flick," "spit and splatter," "wrapped in clean paper," and "salt pepper vinegar," the poem paints a vivid picture of the traditional chip shop experience. Additionally, the inclusion of specific fish names such as haddock, cod, skate, and ling lends an air of authenticity to the narrative.

Terry Ireland
Date: 6/5/2024 7:09:00 AM

Thanks very much. Sadly these days it is becoming too expensive to be enjoyed very often.

Deb M

Date: 5/29/2024 11:47:00 AM

Brilliant Terry!! I understand the importance of a good local chippy in the UK and the generational Chippy. Great Title also.....Debx

Terry Ireland
Date: 6/5/2024 7:11:00 AM

Thanks Deb. I remember the days when it nicely finished off a night pf 14 pints. Oh to be young again.