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FISH IN BOWL Me frolic fish once fluttering fins swam through opulent aqua flow sometimes too fast or often too slow, sudden whirling rolled on hurried spins. Sea foam surged on scarlet scaly skin Strange quirky sea-creatures all around Both prey and predator to astound. Smooth touch of mossy weeds brown or green. Every moment a challenge with thrill Me frolic fish once swimming in swarm, Happy to thrive on algae and worm. Haply caught with thousands of small krill. Once muse amused welcoming gay mood. Now imprisoned in little glass bowl. Helpless! Remembering sea: Part and whole Now confined in cell, only to brood. With my eyes open I dream to swim in vast sea and wake up in small pot. Sea is snatched, tiny jar to allot. None can listen to my soundless scream. 03/14/20 First Place 'Gif your Best Anything' Contest by William Kekaula

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Date: 3/15/2020 11:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem with great imagery, Anisha, congratulations on your win. Hugs eve
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 3/16/2020 12:04:00 AM
Thanks n Regards
Date: 3/14/2020 3:50:00 PM
Metaphorically beautiful, Anisha, wonderfully well-worded all-around with exquisite imagery and worthy to be in 1st place, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William
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Date: 3/16/2020 12:04:00 AM
Thanks William for appreciation . Blessing always.

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