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"snow touches with love the forest trees and fields, and every single thing with his cold fingers, and covers them all with a white blanket, whispering, now go to sleep..." Quote - by Constance It began as a single snowflake and all night it snowed, then, in the morn' forests and fields sparkled in the daylight; and bare tree branches were heavy where the snow glowed. It had become windy and fierce as trees swayed and bowed, the air turned quite crisp and cold with a frosty winter bite; it began as a single snowflake and all night it snowed. Somewhere hidden the snow birds sang and a crow crowed, as all nature's beauty was veiled with an inner light; and bare tree branches were heavy where the snow glowed. A girl in a red coat walked a bridge where snow had flowed, stunning how the snow and sky met as one, that was a sight; it began as a single snowflake and all night it snowed. Later, in the day the snow was plowed away from each road, a slippery relief, but the all snow scene was a delight; and bare tree branches were heavy where the snow glowed. And during the day the first snow fall of winter had slowed, yet, still the trees, forest and fields were bathed in white; it began as a single snowflake and all night it snowed, and bare tree branches were heavy where the snow glowed. _______________________ November 08, 2022 Poetry/Villanelle/First Winter Snowstorm View Copyright Protected, ID 11-1499-940-08 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Third Person Villanelle sponsor, L MILTON HANKINS, Judged 11/23/2022 First Place

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Date: 12/10/2022 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful quote and Villanelle, Constance. "...as all nature's beauty was veiled with an inner light...Amazing how snow can transform the earth. Congratulations on first place!
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Date: 12/10/2022 12:43:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 11/24/2022 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on First with your lovely snow poem! Snow does have a special beauty. I just wish it didn't need to be cold, too :)
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Date: 11/25/2022 5:11:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much for the comment, congratulations and compliment, appreciate. I love the cold !
Date: 11/23/2022 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win for this very descriptive villanelle
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Date: 11/24/2022 5:44:00 AM
Terry, thank you so much for the visit, congratulations and compliment, appreciate !
Date: 11/23/2022 8:33:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for this, making me vicariously experience the essence of your quote..."snow touches with love the forest trees and fields, and every single thing with his cold fingers, and covers them all with a white blanket, whispering, now go to sleep..." God bless you.
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Date: 11/24/2022 5:44:00 AM
Beata, thank you so much for the congrats, compliment and lovely comment, appreciate !
Date: 11/23/2022 8:10:00 PM
Very beautiful "Snowstorm View". Congratulations!
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Date: 11/24/2022 5:45:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 11/23/2022 3:59:00 PM
My congratulations on your poem having been awarded 1st place Villanelle, Contance. It's entrancing.
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Date: 11/24/2022 5:46:00 AM
Jenna, thank you so much for the congratulation sand the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 11/23/2022 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance! Your beautifully written look at the first snowfall of winter was rich with imagery and rose to the top of thirty-five entries in my contest. Your win is to be celebrated.
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Date: 11/23/2022 11:49:00 AM
Milt, thank you so much for the inspiration, contest, and for my wonderful placement, and for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 11/9/2022 1:46:00 PM
You paint a lovely scene. We see that solo snowflake followed by many more.
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Date: 11/9/2022 4:17:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, appreciate
Date: 11/9/2022 4:21:00 AM
I always love the first snowfall of the winter season, so I choose this theme to write about, hope you like my poem.
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