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Life's containing orb
vacuum's floating jewel :
probes the depth of mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 8:28 PM
OOh great Haiku, grats on making it to the winners list with this beaut:)
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July 8, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Nice win Dan... Linda
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Love the thoughts here, Dan my friend. Congrats on a great win.. Hugs... Arlene
Gibson Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Very good. Congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 3:56 PM
great thoughts!! Congrats for your win.
Callus Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations, Dan. excellent probing haiku! // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 2:31 AM
Dan it's awesome ! Well penned ! Congrats on win!
Mehta Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 12:39 AM
Awesome meaningful write, Dan. congrats on the win
Sietesantos Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 12:10 AM
Hi Dan, congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!
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July 7, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Dan, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
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May 25, 2014 at 1:04 PM
- Great haiku, Dan ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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