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First Touch

blooms, bashful maidens
bowing down timid and shy
at first macho touch

Placed First
 A Brian Strand Shortie Poetry Contest

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2022

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January 7, 2023 at 7:53 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

February 23, 2022 at 5:10 PM

Blossoms make our hearts bloom as well Valsa. This is lovely. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo

February 23, 2022 at 2:34 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful. Congratulations dear friend. A fav..

Brian Sambourne

January 11, 2022 at 2:48 PM

Greetings Valsa, Your Haiku's often contain remarkable contrasts. "Bashful maidens" to a "macho touch." Delightful, particularly with the refreshing alliteration. Cheers, Brian

Charles Messina

January 8, 2022 at 4:56 AM

Lovely haiku, Valsa. Beautiful! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings...Charlie

January 8, 2022 at 6:17 PM

Thanks a lot Charles for your kind visit ! Glad you enjoyed the poem~~

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2022 at 3:45 PM

I like that imagery very much, Valsa

January 7, 2022 at 8:48 PM

Thanks a lot Andrea .....! :)

Victor Buhagiar

January 7, 2022 at 10:06 AM

Splendid, both picture and haiku. You are very adept at these haikus. Best for a win.

January 7, 2022 at 8:41 PM

I am just experimenting with different forms.... If you reall liked it, I am happy ! Thanks a lot Victor !

January 7, 2022 at 8:34 AM

A lovely image Valsa, enjoy your weekend. Tom

January 7, 2022 at 8:40 PM

Thanks a lot Tom. Have a great weekend !

January 7, 2022 at 7:08 AM

Enjoyed the imagery of this tender encounter, Valsa.

January 7, 2022 at 8:39 PM

Thanks a lot Vijay !

Connie Marcum Wong

January 7, 2022 at 5:48 AM

The morphing of the caterpillar into the butterfly lets us know we may also do the same in our lives. I love your haiku Valsa. Blessings xxoo

January 7, 2022 at 8:38 PM

Yes, from crawling worms, we can turn into flying butterflies. Thank you Connie !

January 7, 2022 at 5:36 AM

A fantastic Haiku, Valsa. Best wishes of luck in the contest, dear friend:))

January 7, 2022 at 8:36 PM

Thanks a lot Lasaad ! You are so inspirational my friend !

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 7, 2022 at 3:37 AM

- A lovely haiku, Valsa - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

January 7, 2022 at 4:33 AM

Thanks for your kind visit to my page Anne..... ! Love :) ;)

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