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blooms, bashful maidens bowing down timid and shy at first macho touch
 Placed First A Brian Strand Shortie Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/7/2023 7:53:00 AM
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Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 2/23/2022 5:10:00 PM
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Blossoms make our hearts bloom as well Valsa. This is lovely. Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo
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Jcb Brul
Date: 2/23/2022 2:34:00 PM
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Breathtakingly beautiful. Congratulations dear friend. A fav..
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/11/2022 2:48:00 PM
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Greetings Valsa, Your Haiku's often contain remarkable contrasts. "Bashful maidens" to a "macho touch." Delightful, particularly with the refreshing alliteration. Cheers, Brian
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/8/2022 4:56:00 AM
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Lovely haiku, Valsa. Beautiful! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings...Charlie
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Valsa George
Date: 1/8/2022 6:17:00 PM
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Thanks a lot Charles for your kind visit ! Glad you enjoyed the poem~~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/7/2022 3:45:00 PM
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I like that imagery very much, Valsa
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 8:48:00 PM
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Thanks a lot Andrea .....! :)
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 1/7/2022 10:06:00 AM
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Splendid, both picture and haiku. You are very adept at these haikus. Best for a win.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 8:41:00 PM
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I am just experimenting with different forms.... If you reall liked it, I am happy ! Thanks a lot Victor !
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/7/2022 8:34:00 AM
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A lovely image Valsa, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 8:40:00 PM
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Thanks a lot Tom. Have a great weekend !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 7:08:00 AM
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Enjoyed the imagery of this tender encounter, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 8:39:00 PM
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Thanks a lot Vijay !
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/7/2022 5:48:00 AM
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The morphing of the caterpillar into the butterfly lets us know we may also do the same in our lives. I love your haiku Valsa. Blessings xxoo
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 8:38:00 PM
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Yes, from crawling worms, we can turn into flying butterflies. Thank you Connie !
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Sotto Poet
Date: 1/7/2022 5:36:00 AM
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A fantastic Haiku, Valsa. Best wishes of luck in the contest, dear friend:))
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 8:36:00 PM
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Thanks a lot Lasaad ! You are so inspirational my friend !
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2022 3:37:00 AM
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- A lovely haiku, Valsa - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 4:33:00 AM
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Thanks for your kind visit to my page Anne..... ! Love :) ;)

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