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When I was a young child my parents would be stern, but smiled when they'd saw me running wild. I couldn't have been mild, but full of excitement; cherished memories I've filed. It only takes a whiff of fresh salt ocean air to take me complete away, back to my first trip to the ocean beach on a summer day. It was a trip I couldn't forget, full of excitement and play. I couldn't sleep the night before thinking about the trip to the beach. When we finally arrived and walked out as close to the shores reach, after dad picked out a spot to place our towels. Walked about and felted the warm gritty sand between our toes. I looked out and listen to the sound of crashing waves on the sand, and gulls beating their wings making loud sounds. Mom held my small hand, as the cold waves would just threw me around. Walking up and down the beach, I found seashells that had brilliant colors like a rainbow that waves had washed up onto the shore; maybe long ago. Sitting down on the sand, I built a sand castle and felt the wind on my face as dad shared childhood stories. This is one of many of my cherished memories. 4/21/2018 Poetry Contest: ANY RHYME FORM - AN EARLY CHILDHOOD MEMORY – Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/28/2018 6:13:00 AM
Eve, how wonderful our childhood memories can be. My first trip to the beach was in Daytona in June 1963. In August of that same year, I joined the Air Force and it afforded me the opportunity to visit beaches in Hawaii, California, South Carolina, and finally, after more than 20 years, back in my home state of Georgia. Congratulations on such a fine poem and the memories you have.
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:39:00 AM
Awwwww! This nostalgic piece brings back memories of my own visits with my father and brothers to the beach! One of the most memorable was on Holy Saturdays when we would go at 6:00 in the morning to watch the sunrise - it was glorious! Congratulations on your win and thanks for the memories, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 4/26/2018 1:20:00 AM
We both connect the sea to childhood, you and me. A lovely coincidence Eve. Well done on your placement.
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:56:00 PM
No greater way to appreciate a memory then to conjoin it with a trip to the beach with mom and dad. Congratulations on your winning poem Eve.
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:56:00 PM
What a lovely memory. Thanks for sharing it in such an artistic fashion. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/25/2018 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Such a beautiful memory.
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Date: 4/25/2018 12:27:00 PM
Big congrats Eve to win on your woderful poem. Love
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful nostalgic poem, Eve. Well penned. Congrats on your silver medal win.
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Date: 4/25/2018 6:12:00 AM
Seaside childhood memories for me mostly good, I always had a fear that my dad would drown, he swam so far out I would lose sight of him. Hadn't thought about it at the time I wrote my piece. I feel indebted to you for your evocative poem, thank you, and congratulations on your second place Eve, Mick
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Date: 4/23/2018 5:38:00 PM
Oh i just love this Memory and the way you weave the words into a wonderful poem, good luck in contest.
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Date: 4/23/2018 5:15:00 PM
Very lovely memory to have. I too loved the beach when I lived in WA state, but my one memory(before I was 5 and moved away) is bad. We were on our way there and had to turn around and go back home because of rain.
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