First Things First
First I liked your voice
I really liked it though it isn't often on
Then I liked your smile from over the table
Soft and real and centered on me only
And I thought it cannot end like this so
Then I liked your hand
giving me tight space for no doubts
Then I liked your no doubts
about you who like what I am
Very nice change, I must say
A bit frightening that you assume too much
But still
Copyright © Weeping Willow | Year Posted 2016
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