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First Things First

First I liked your voice I really liked it though it isn't often on Then I liked your smile from over the table Soft and real and centered on me only And I thought it cannot end like this so Then I liked your hand giving me tight space for no doubts Then I liked your no doubts about you who like what I am Very nice change, I must say A bit frightening that you assume too much But still

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Date: 12/7/2016 8:53:00 AM
Long time no see:) This is an interesting poem; gives the reader food for thought; makes me think of a blind date, which does not sound at all bad:) Regards // paul
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Weeping Willow
Date: 12/7/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Paul! You are very kind :) :)

Book: Reflection on the Important Things