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Something was different this morning I'd gone to bed chilled, reached for another blanket knowing I'd have to defrost with coffee before bracing for the north wind. But sunlight peeked at me through my kitchen window. Too tempting not to open the door and say, "Good morning." There it was— the first crocus greeting me as if it was her calling card. I felt the warmth of sunshine on my face and grinned knowing Spring didn't forget to visit.

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Date: 5/23/2025 11:59:00 AM
How beautiful and well written dear linnersz, your poem here is like one that should be used as an example of what mindfulness looks like! Embracing little things and pleasures of life and waking up with warmth within your heart, welcoming the first glimpse of something fruitful! I love everything about this seamless write! Another exquisite and elegant poem from your soul! Pleasure reading your poem! It my heart warm too! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/23/2025 12:10:00 PM
Your reviews are always so much better than the poem you write them for, Ink. Seriously, I'm grateful that you appreciate those little things in life that too often get overlooked. They can be very special. Merci, petite fille hugs
Date: 5/23/2025 10:05:00 AM
This was a delightful sigh of a read ... CayCay
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Date: 5/23/2025 10:11:00 AM
Hi CayCay and thank you for finding delight in this one. Hugs.

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