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First Sorrowful Mystery

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Amidst the Garden of Gethsemane to dissipate from the sorrow and pain Looking up to the heavens in discourse on bend knees in unspoken recourse Archangel Chamuel from heaven appeared giving Him strength and ease as challenge neared A kiss upon the cheek to flatter Him in friendship, but gravitate to breach whim A suffering servant, scapegoat unfurled meant to die for us, the sins of the world Alienated ilk malignant growth transitory moment for lifetime oath His words are perspicuous, clear, towards capricious, inurbane souls, not ignored 9/13/2016

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Viv Wigley

Date: 9/18/2016 12:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve, oin a worthy write. Viv x

David Smith

Date: 9/17/2016 5:55:00 PM

Very clever and to link to something as thought provoking and powerful. Skillful indeed. I am not up to your standard in this area. One day perhaps.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/17/2016 3:35:00 PM

Thanks Eve for your entry, was a difficult challenge but you made it look easy. Congrats on a fine placement!

Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2016 3:44:00 PM

thank you, John, for the placement enjoyed the challenge. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2016 8:12:00 PM

It is so interesting to see how everyone used the words in totally different ways. It's great to see your strong spiritual side in this poetry, Eve. Good luck in the contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/17/2016 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2016 4:30:00 PM

ohh, this is divine, eve... i like how you interpreted the theme with such sublime effect..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2016 5:52:00 PM

thank you, Nette..

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 9/14/2016 11:40:00 AM

A well penned spiritual piece.. all the best in the contest.. i enjoyed .. //blessings

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2016 5:53:00 PM

Thank you, Lewis, for the good luck an enjoying the poem Hugs Eve

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/14/2016 10:46:00 AM

The death of Jesus is always an inspirational story. Beautifully written Mrs Eve:)

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2016 5:54:00 PM

Thank you , Daniel, yes it is, I ache every time I think about it or recite my prayers.

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/14/2016 7:11:00 AM

Perfect use of the prescribed words ... Nice ... A sure success ...

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2016 5:55:00 PM

Thank you, Probir... Hugs

Phillip Garcia

Date: 9/14/2016 6:05:00 AM

I do believe you've penned a winner. I'm not well versed on the original story but am inspired to learn now because of beautiful piece. An early congratulations to you

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2016 5:56:00 PM

Thank you for reading , Phillip, for the inspirational feeling. Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/14/2016 3:45:00 AM

Excellent. Good spiritual poem. Done well. Thanks for sharing it.

Eve Roper
Date: 9/15/2016 5:56:00 PM

Thank you, Ravi Hugs