First snowflakes

first snowflakes launching
sweet southbound dreams and longings
~ travel posters call



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Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 11:58 PM
Love that last line … as long as the snowflakes remain in Canada or else only on the travel posters … :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 2:28 AM
When I retire will I go southbound? This haiku reminds me that many do, however, I doubt I will be one of them.
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 5:25 AM
The travel bug can hit you at any age.
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