First Red Rose of Summer

As the first red rose blooms
The first bloom of summer__see
It reminds me of you dear
For I know how much you
Love roses especially those of red
I long to see you soon

But our eyes won't gaze soon
I'll have to enjoy the blooms
All by myself__ they are red
Like all my blood flowing see
From my broken heart that you
Broke when you left my dear

I loved you so much my dear
But you found another love soon
I just could not share you
But miss you when roses blooms
There is another that I see
And he really doesn't like red

I'll just dig up roses red
Then I'll forget about you dear
This new person I finally see
I will really enjoy marrying soon
We will marry when pink blooms
Adorn the running rose__ forget you

I'll just forget all about you
Except now when blooms roses red
Next year there will be blooms
Of pale pink everywhere dear
I will enjoy planting them soon
I hope that you will see

All the red roses disappear see
Soon they will go then you
Remember our lost love very soon
Every time you see roses red
You will remember me my dear
You'll remember when red roses blooms

Red roses see over there red
Ones that you really love dear
Full bloom soon red rose blooms   

(First try at a Sestina...Thanks for the challenge Jared.)
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Loving Iii Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 12:04 PM
you should print this and give it to you know who. john
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest "The Sestina" Sara. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 9:55 AM
You did well with your first try. Congratulationsl. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Sestina contest.. a wonderful honor for a equally wonderful poem.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Lusha Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 4:16 AM
Really beautiful Sara. Of course we love roses here in england, our national flower..Good luck I'm sure this is a winner......Allie
Tapley Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 7:55 PM
BEAUTIFUL!!! Sestina's are tough and you created a wonderful poem. A really great write. I love the title. I am a sucker for roses.
Pickett Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Thank you my friend for entering this beauty for my Sestina contest... All of the entries so far have been some hard hitting poems that will give me much to think about when the time comes.... And Andrea is correct, this form can be rather boring to read because of the repeating six words... Although, my intention is not to bore but to challenge you all... It is no fun to provide you with a form that is widely used, like the Haiku, Senryu, or even Free-verse... I want you all to think....:JP]
Culverhouse Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 6:58 AM
enjoyed reading
Falotico Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 6:09 AM
You know I love to write about roses lol...very well written
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 10:41 PM
I have no idea if it's a sestina or not. but it is a great attempt because sestinas I have seen in books are quite boring and yours is NOT. LUv, andrea
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April 27, 2010 at 7:59 PM
sweet, nice, and everything nice, enjoyed the read Sara,..p.d.
Chachere Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Hm, this sounds sad..forget, i have never been able to understand that word fully.maybe i have a problem..but this also sounds of a part of your true self Sara.sad, lovely write.a gazing in the eyes of lovers, always a deep moment. -Always&Forever Lynette
Loving Iii Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:45 PM
my fav flower. john
Funk Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Its a beautiful poem. i love it.
Esquire Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Dear Sara, Reading this Sestina of Yours has helped me see a bit better as to the form but I don't think I'm ready to try it Yet YOUR Talent will take YOU to the Winners Circle A Superb effort Thank-You for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
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