Notes About The Poem

11/29/2024 for How my first poem was born Poetry Contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

First Poem

fear, embarrassment
to bare myself publicly
in style and essence
diving into the deep end
to dwell in a new realm - plunge!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:52 PM
David, glad you took the plunge. I reveal more of myself with poetry than in any other way. Congrats!
Crandall Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Kim, yes, I guess that's true for me too. I great means of self-expression. Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:26 PM
Awesome. Taking that plunge. Congrats
Crandall Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Alex Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 8:04 PM
It has been a plunge. Great concept of first poem. Congratulations!
Crandall Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 9:42 PM
Thanks Christuraj
Brul Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 12:34 AM
As we experience moments of vulnerability, it is from where were transformation takes place. Thank you for sharing your poetic story. Congratulations and stay creative. ^___^ JCB
Crandall Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 9:10 AM
Thanks JCB - I like your insight!
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 1:39 PM
This is so on point I know many writers and poets can relate! Good luck in the contest David!
Crandall Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Karen!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace