First Poem

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11/29/2024 for How my first poem was born Poetry Contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

fear, embarrassment to bare myself publicly in style and essence diving into the deep end to dwell in a new realm - plunge!

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/15/2024 12:52:00 PM

David, glad you took the plunge. I reveal more of myself with poetry than in any other way. Congrats!

David Crandall
Date: 12/15/2024 1:45:00 PM

Kim, yes, I guess that's true for me too. I great means of self-expression. Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2024 12:26:00 PM

Awesome. Taking that plunge. Congrats

David Crandall
Date: 12/15/2024 1:44:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/14/2024 8:04:00 PM

It has been a plunge. Great concept of first poem. Congratulations!

David Crandall
Date: 12/14/2024 9:42:00 PM

Thanks Christuraj

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/13/2024 12:34:00 AM

As we experience moments of vulnerability, it is from where were transformation takes place. Thank you for sharing your poetic story. Congratulations and stay creative. ^___^ JCB

David Crandall
Date: 12/13/2024 9:10:00 AM

Thanks JCB - I like your insight!

Karen Jones

Date: 11/29/2024 1:39:00 PM

This is so on point I know many writers and poets can relate! Good luck in the contest David!

David Crandall
Date: 11/29/2024 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Karen!