Harry Horsman Poet Sijo

First Party

(Moral Dilemma?)

Her father told her, beware men and strong booze and liquors;
alas she met a boy and she was tempted, and had a skinful:
soon to leave the party to wander home, without her knickers.

© Harry J Horsman  2011

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Elaine George May 7, 2011 at 9:44 PM lol! Good one, Harry. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2011 at 12:30 PM hahaha, that last part made me laugh. I give this one my own award of the funniest one! congratulations.

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2011 at 8:14 PM powerful one, harry with my best congrats on the hefty win! :) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2011 at 3:39 PM So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Harry. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico May 4, 2011 at 1:42 PM Congrats Harry on a fine win!!

Jack Horne May 4, 2011 at 1:25 PM LOL Many congratulations on your win, Harry : )

Gautami Phookan May 4, 2011 at 12:57 PM Congrats harry on your win in this contest. That's some funny wit, gautami

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2011 at 11:33 AM Congratulations Harry on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2011 at 11:32 AM Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite May 4, 2011 at 10:26 AM Nice one Harry!, Thanks for supporting my contest and Congrats on your 6th place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, wish you all the best. Adeleke

John Freeman May 4, 2011 at 10:25 AM Harry , it's great to see you in the top ten again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's 6th place honor. Agape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick May 4, 2011 at 6:30 AM Shame on her..and on you...just kidding. this made me laugh. congrats. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 4, 2011 at 4:47 AM Congrats Harry on your excellent win in Sweet Sijo contest with this wonderful entry luv.. your words constantly amaze my spirit..hope u are doing well....miss u so much... enjoy another sweet victory luv.. your friendship is so valuable to this "Sweetheart"...

Dr.Ram Mehta May 4, 2011 at 4:35 AM Congrtulaions on the win in the contest of Adeleke, harry

Carolyn Devonshire March 23, 2011 at 10:00 AM Oh my, this is sooo funny, Harry. Thanks for the laugh! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2011 at 5:42 AM I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Harry. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta March 22, 2011 at 3:03 PM hahahah what a dilemma? harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 22, 2011 at 2:58 PM Harry ..unique and original piece luv.. cute premise too.. super entry for the new contest.. am sure will be atop of the winners list my friend.. luv it .. and u ..

Elaine George March 22, 2011 at 10:51 AM lol. Thanks for making my day, Harry. Lainie

Nette Onclaud March 22, 2011 at 10:37 AM funnny! a different humorous attack for adeleke, harry! laughus winning wishes! :) hugggs, nette

George Aul March 22, 2011 at 10:35 AM Good luck in the contest........George