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first posted 2017, re-posted Feb.2023

 

 

 

The clocks have gone back and all is still. The trees are molten gold. The garden’s dieback mode infectious, the air is damp and cold. No texture to the sky, its sullen grey devoid of shapes of clouds, and no birds fly. A melancholic mist shroud drapes the resolutely silent land, waiting, knowing change accepting yet again. A blanket soft unfurled by hand unseen, the autumn stage directing. The players now must reconcile as winter signs unfold and glad we are that for a while the trees are molten gold.

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Date: 3/3/2023 12:51:00 PM
Love the trees when they’re molten gold, autumn is the loveliest time of year. A most descriptive poem you’ve written Peter… Belle
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/4/2023 7:06:00 AM
Many thanks for this lovely comment Belle.
Date: 2/28/2023 6:32:00 AM
Oh, I just love this. November is a special month for me and Autumn is my favorite season of them all. Love this. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Peter Rees
Date: 3/1/2023 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for this lovely comment. The miracle of Earth’s seasons continues to amaze.
Date: 2/20/2023 11:38:00 PM
Well that has tainted the DD reference for me - I'd quite liked it until then! :) I could insist it's my real name and I'm now quite affronted haha! I'll just have to own it. If Danny DeVito and Dr Dolittle styled it out, then so can I! Haha :)
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/21/2023 12:51:00 AM
DD it is then. HaHa
Date: 2/19/2023 2:25:00 PM
Truly beautiful, if I can cast my mind back to Autumn...
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Peter Rees
Date: 2/20/2023 7:19:00 AM
Many thanks, DD (not sure how to address you and DD sounds a little like Donald Duck)

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