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The final kismet of three hundred sixty five days Which charmed me in time’s remembering jaunts , As radiant eyes winked , and lacy veils blew Beyond late dusk as old tower gongs pealed, When hymn of joy was one blessed song That cuddled me back where I came from: And now, a freshly ripe morn inscribes my dream Inviting my heart to raise, to adorn new curtains on the hall . Emerald leaves sprout birthing moments in bold flight First pages of excitement revel through evening, gold-- Like new chapters’ written intents quite spirited Buoying lithesome aspirations still to be done… How childlike thrill awaits more literary adventures, My travel pursuits that may need a heady romp... Undaunted, I would scribble mementos on December’s path Hoping the coming year, Twenty Twenty, would take me there -------------------- 8/1/2019 One Hundred and Thirty Six Words Contest Sponsor: John Lawless Checked via wordcounter.net -------------------------- ~ In our country, the informal yet jovial mood of Christmas and New Year commences on September 1. Holiday songs ring on the radio; women begin to order gifts. Last night, my family and friends discussed freely our wishes for next year. This is our Asian- Christian tradition.

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Date: 9/22/2019 12:14:00 AM
I love the hopeful energy you penned.
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:33:00 PM
Nice one Nette, Surely not thinking of Christmas already!! Give us some space before the madness starts!
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Date: 9/3/2019 3:04:00 AM
Love this idea nette, three days of Christmas is never enough. Well written verse Good luck. Just back from the coast, had a lovely time away. Hope all's well. Tom
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Date: 9/2/2019 1:45:00 PM
And what a positive one it is... and very poetic too...
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Date: 9/2/2019 10:34:00 AM
Happy New Year! And may your dreams come true...with a win too!
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Date: 9/2/2019 8:43:00 AM
Really nice nette. Once again your talent shines in this wonderful 136 word beauty. Best wishes in the contest
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