First Love

Exhilarating

     as

          a

               splendid

                     effervescent

                           champagne!


Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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First Place win in First Love Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fiery Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 2:29 AM
first love is really really exhilarating dear Bob...cheers !
Taylor Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 5:50 PM
Kudos, Chief. Great script.
White Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:42 AM
Lucky man to find a girl like that- Congrats on your win
Orschell Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Congradulations!!!! -Destiny
Mckenzie Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Robert~ Congratulations on your win! Laura:)
Brown Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Robert. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
Murphy Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:36 AM
very nice congrats on your win faleshia
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:43 AM
By the way, bringing up the contest winners does take a long time on my computer as well! You are not alone.
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Nicely done, Bob. Big congrats on taking first place!!! Love, Carolyn
Ryerson Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Yoy nailed it Robert! Especially the first word!...Congrats on your 1st place win and in Linda- Marie's contest...I'm sure there are many more to come! - Tim
Foster Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 11:18 PM
A bubbly person then. congratulations....Margaret
Kelly Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 11:05 PM
Congrats , Robert , on your well deserved win . I see , she popped your cork .....
Clark Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations Robert on your outstanding win! Jeralynn
Haick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Ah! First love!! Unforgetable! Congratulations on your awesome win, Robert!! Enjoy it as you deserve this! Peace, Audrey
La France Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:35 PM
And congratulations back to you, on first place with this awesome poem of love, Linda-Marie, sure has some wonderful contests for us.. love constance
Richards Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Hooray for your win Robert!! This poem bubbles!!! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:05 PM
Congrats Bob on your 1st place win in my "First Love" contest... another wonderful write to capture first place..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Taylor Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Good one, Bob. Beat of luck in the contest.
Gorelick Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 6:41 PM
I seem to remember that..sigh. BG
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