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First Love-Last Goodbye

Tears escape slowly Flowing down her young, sweet face Her heart left to bleed

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2010 12:44:00 PM

Congrats Shirley on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a really great one to share with us all my friend with luv...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2010 7:45:00 AM

Shirley, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 10/20/2010 4:25:00 AM

Sad, but very eloquent, enjoyed. Congrats on your feature.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2010 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shirley. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/19/2010 11:15:00 AM

A sad but beautiful Senryu, Shirley. Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/28/2010 2:20:00 AM

beautiful senryu, Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2010 11:14:00 AM

Sad piece with great imagery, WNN

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/16/2010 5:27:00 AM

A beautiful new day, many wonderful new poems to read of which yours is among,the weekend is upon us. What more could I ask for? I hope you have a fantastic weekend filled with love, happiness, and lots of inspiration Shirley. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2010 10:30:00 PM

sad senryu, enjoyed..P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/15/2010 9:48:00 PM

Nice well worded with nice images.