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the evergreen trees
elegantly clad in the ....
spirit of season




For Deborah's Holiday Haiku contest# 12 rating

my favorite holiday is "Christmas"
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Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 8:07 AM
lovely haiku, congrats on your win Joyce
Freeman Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Beautiful imagery of everlasting life and it's seasons, Joyce. Agape, Moses
Villarosa Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 10:34 PM
With the pile of gifts under it, this is the joyous moments that we celebrate it with our loved ones, congratulations on your well deserved win, Joyce. (^_^) Noel.
Gorelick Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 8:34 PM
This is an "elegant" write and deserving of your win. BG
Mannan Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Many congratulations Joyce for this well deserved win.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations, Joyce, on this fine win. Luv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest, Joyce! Love, audrey
Devonshire Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joyce! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on this well deserv ed win, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in the Haiku contest with this wonderful entry so vivid and expressive.. enjoy your sweet victory with luv my friend...
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:15 AM
They are so beautiful that they need no ornaments, Joyce. I like a tree with only lights. A wonderful entry for Deb's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Hey, it's a bit like mine this one!! Very nice! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Quite a novel way to write on Christamas, Joyce
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