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First Legitimate Haiku

"God" by: Eric L. Boddie Deliver Your Sun To the bright, precious spring sky; To revitalize

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Date: 1/15/2016 9:49:00 PM

Excellent haiku! Warm and inspiring too. :)

Date: 12/23/2015 11:48:00 AM

a beautiful haiku... 7

Date: 9/29/2015 1:25:00 PM

I am a haiku lover and this is brilliant! Love it! Pandita

Date: 9/18/2015 2:38:00 PM

I like the title. is there haikus that are illegitimate?:-) you did it well

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/18/2015 3:21:00 PM

I tried this style a couple of times....but in the end I got it right finally...lol

Date: 9/16/2015 3:27:00 PM

Eric, there you go , a beautiful haiku 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, giving thanks. ..

Eric Boddie
Date: 9/16/2015 6:33:00 PM

thank you bw....I tried to write off just looking and from high school memory....lol....but I looked it up and got the facts on it....;)