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First Legitimate Haiku

"God"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Deliver Your Sun
To the bright, precious spring sky;
To revitalize

bibleblessinggodspringhaiku

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Susan Gentry

January 15, 2016 at 9:49 PM

Excellent haiku! Warm and inspiring too. :)

Poesy Relish

December 23, 2015 at 11:48 AM

a beautiful haiku... 7

Pandita Sietesantos

September 29, 2015 at 1:25 PM

I am a haiku lover and this is brilliant! Love it! Pandita

Njeri Hunjeri

September 18, 2015 at 2:38 PM

I like the title. is there haikus that are illegitimate?:-) you did it well

Eric Boddie

September 18, 2015 at 3:21 PM

I tried this style a couple of times....but in the end I got it right finally...lol

Constance La France

September 16, 2015 at 3:27 PM

Eric, there you go , a beautiful haiku 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, giving thanks. ..

Eric Boddie

September 16, 2015 at 6:33 PM

thank you bw....I tried to write off just looking and from high school memory....lol....but I looked it up and got the facts on it....;)

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