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First Law of Reprehensibility

I little knew the gravity of my infraction Till I perceived the weight of your reaction

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John Hamilton

Date: 12/30/2019 9:13:00 AM

Wonderful write, short and concise, too bad some people are like this, can't comprehend the gravity of their actions until they see how tragic the consequences are. Well said Geoffrey!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/13/2019 1:08:00 PM

Great! Congratulations, Geoffrey!

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/19/2019 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Jean Murray

Date: 12/11/2019 4:13:00 PM

Cardiac congratulations?

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/12/2019 2:25:00 AM

Yes, if it was ‘infarction’! (Got that too). Thanks for the response,Jean

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/11/2019 4:03:00 AM

Congrats on your win!;)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/12/2019 2:21:00 AM

Thank you, Brenda.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/10/2019 11:53:00 PM

Back with Congrats!

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/12/2019 2:21:00 AM

Thanks again, PS.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/10/2019 11:40:00 PM

Lovely flow, Geoffrey. A FAVE for me.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/12/2019 2:19:00 AM

Many thanks, Line

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/10/2019 9:57:00 PM

Brewer's First Theory of Physics, is it not?! Congrats, Geoffrey! Cheers, Gershon

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/12/2019 2:19:00 AM

Thanks again Gershon. My last reply went into comments by mistake.

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 9:20:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Geoffrey

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 12/8/2019 8:35:00 PM

From the master of the concise, precise, I am flattered. Thanks Gershon.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/8/2019 3:39:00 PM

Ooh, so precisely perfect, Geoffrey. Great one! Cheers, Gershon

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/3/2019 8:33:00 AM

Very clever--and scientific!

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 12/7/2019 5:53:00 AM

Thanks PS