First Law of Reprehensibility

I little knew the gravity of my infraction
Till I perceived the weight of your reaction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Wonderful write, short and concise, too bad some people are like this, can't comprehend the gravity of their actions until they see how tragic the consequences are. Well said Geoffrey!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Great! Congratulations, Geoffrey!
Brewer Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Murray Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Cardiac congratulations?
Brewer Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 2:25 AM
Yes, if it was ‘infarction’! (Got that too). Thanks for the response,Jean
Chiri Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 4:03 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
Brewer Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 2:21 AM
Thank you, Brenda.
Awtry Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 11:53 PM
Back with Congrats!
Brewer Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 2:21 AM
Thanks again, PS.
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 11:40 PM
Lovely flow, Geoffrey. A FAVE for me.
Brewer Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 2:19 AM
Many thanks, Line
Wolf Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Brewer's First Theory of Physics, is it not?! Congrats, Geoffrey! Cheers, Gershon
Brewer Avatar
December 12, 2019 at 2:19 AM
Thanks again Gershon. My last reply went into comments by mistake.
Na Avatar
December 10, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Geoffrey
Brewer Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 8:35 PM
From the master of the concise, precise, I am flattered. Thanks Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Ooh, so precisely perfect, Geoffrey. Great one! Cheers, Gershon
Awtry Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Very clever--and scientific!
Brewer Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 5:53 AM
Thanks PS
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