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First Kiss

When hearts meet and eyes lock when lips touch and hands circle thrill shoots blood gushes sensation fills and the heart cherishes thus we transcend gliding unawares to a distant land of thriving pleasure © Nadiya (15 Jan '15) *Selected as poem of the day, 17 Jan 2015 *Placed 1st in the contest 'Your Favourite Poem' by Carol Eastman on 19 March 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/19/2015 11:46:00 PM

Passionate write Posey! Congrats on big win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2015 12:23:00 PM

POESY, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~

Carol Mays

Date: 1/30/2015 11:07:00 AM

Very sensual, succinct, lovely poem. Thanks. Carol

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/30/2015 12:50:00 PM

Thank u Carol... appreciate your visit and comment. Regards..nads!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/23/2015 10:39:00 AM

truly deep very beautiful pen excellent piece nadiya

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/23/2015 2:48:00 PM

ThAnk you Liam...

Ganapathiraman Raman

Date: 1/21/2015 4:16:00 AM

Nadiya What a lovely poem! Many a poem have I read; And with certainty it can be said; My heart did a beat miss; On seeing this poem "First Kiss"; Congratulations and have a great new year Ganapathiraman

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/21/2015 5:43:00 AM

Thank you for your nice words... you have a wonderful year as well.. be blessed, nad!

Anthony Beesley

Date: 1/17/2015 8:24:00 PM

Who are U? I luv it!

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 8:44:00 PM

Thank you Anthony ... good to know you liked my pen... best wishes

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/17/2015 7:11:00 PM

Very nicely written, congrats on Poem of the Day...

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 8:43:00 PM

Thank you Ed... blessings

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/17/2015 4:37:00 PM

A wonderful expressive poem. Congratulations on Poem of the Day.

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thank you carol...

David Meade

Date: 1/17/2015 3:29:00 PM

A love journey that begins with a kiss . . . lovely poem! Congrats on POTD

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 3:43:00 PM

Thank you David...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/17/2015 2:34:00 PM

So beautiful this is.Welcome to ps sweet lady!!Charma

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 2:46:00 PM

Thank you charmaine.. hugs, nad

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/17/2015 1:57:00 PM

First kisses are thrilling, but if we are lucky, they get better and better! A sweet, romantic poem, Nadiya....congrats on being chosen TPOD!!! Hugs, Rhonda

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 2:05:00 PM

Very true Rhonda, and thank you... hugs, nad

Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2015 1:20:00 PM

such a romantic write - many congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xx

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 1:25:00 PM

Thank u Jan... good to know you liked it... wish a nice weekend... hugs

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/17/2015 11:33:00 AM

Very powerful images and feelings in your words about love, Nadiya. Congratulations on your poem being chosen Poem of the Day. Sandra

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 1:21:00 PM

wish u a good weekend

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 1:20:00 PM

Thank you sandra for taking the time to read

Bill Yates

Date: 1/17/2015 10:56:00 AM

Well done, top rating. I demand a lot from poetry. You did not disappoint.

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Bill... happy that you read and expressed what you felt... wish u a good weekend...

Eve Roper

Date: 1/17/2015 8:25:00 AM

Isn’t love wonderful, Nadiya, all those emotions wrapped up into one moment? A 7 and congratulations for Poem of the Day and . Blessings dear friend and have a good weekend. Eve

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/17/2015 8:51:00 AM

Indeed Eve, without a doubt... thank you and hav a nice weekend