Poesy Relish Poet Lyric

First Kiss

When hearts meet

and eyes lock

when lips touch

and hands circle

thrill shoots

blood gushes

sensation fills

and the heart cherishes

thus we transcend

gliding unawares

to a distant land

of thriving pleasure

© Nadiya (15 Jan '15)

*Selected as poem of the day, 17 Jan 2015
*Placed 1st in the contest 'Your Favourite Poem' by Carol Eastman on 19 March 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 19, 2015 at 11:46 PM Passionate write Posey! Congrats on big win!

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2015 at 12:23 PM POESY, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~

Carol Mays January 30, 2015 at 11:07 AM Very sensual, succinct, lovely poem. Thanks. Carol Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 12:50 PM Thank u Carol... appreciate your visit and comment. Regards..nads!

Liam Mcdaid January 23, 2015 at 10:39 AM truly deep very beautiful pen excellent piece nadiya Poesy Relish January 23, 2015 at 2:48 PM ThAnk you Liam...

Ganapathiraman Raman January 21, 2015 at 4:16 AM Nadiya What a lovely poem! Many a poem have I read; And with certainty it can be said; My heart did a beat miss; On seeing this poem "First Kiss"; Congratulations and have a great new year Ganapathiraman Poesy Relish January 21, 2015 at 5:43 AM Thank you for your nice words... you have a wonderful year as well.. be blessed, nad!

Anthony Beesley January 17, 2015 at 8:24 PM Who are U? I luv it! Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 8:44 PM Thank you Anthony ... good to know you liked my pen... best wishes

Edward Ebbs January 17, 2015 at 7:11 PM Very nicely written, congrats on Poem of the Day... Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 8:43 PM Thank you Ed... blessings

Carol Eastman January 17, 2015 at 4:37 PM A wonderful expressive poem. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thank you carol...

David Meade January 17, 2015 at 3:29 PM A love journey that begins with a kiss . . . lovely poem! Congrats on POTD Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 3:43 PM Thank you David...

Charmaine Chircop January 17, 2015 at 2:34 PM So beautiful this is.Welcome to ps sweet lady!!Charma Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 2:46 PM Thank you charmaine.. hugs, nad

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 17, 2015 at 1:57 PM First kisses are thrilling, but if we are lucky, they get better and better! A sweet, romantic poem, Nadiya....congrats on being chosen TPOD!!! Hugs, Rhonda Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 2:05 PM Very true Rhonda, and thank you... hugs, nad

Jan Allison January 17, 2015 at 1:20 PM such a romantic write - many congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xx Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 1:25 PM Thank u Jan... good to know you liked it... wish a nice weekend... hugs

Sandra Haight January 17, 2015 at 11:33 AM Very powerful images and feelings in your words about love, Nadiya. Congratulations on your poem being chosen Poem of the Day. Sandra Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 1:21 PM wish u a good weekend Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 1:20 PM Thank you sandra for taking the time to read

Bill Yates January 17, 2015 at 10:56 AM Well done, top rating. I demand a lot from poetry. You did not disappoint. Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 1:23 PM Thank you Bill... happy that you read and expressed what you felt... wish u a good weekend...

Eve Roper January 17, 2015 at 8:25 AM Isn’t love wonderful, Nadiya, all those emotions wrapped up into one moment? A 7 and congratulations for Poem of the Day and . Blessings dear friend and have a good weekend. Eve Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 8:51 AM Indeed Eve, without a doubt... thank you and hav a nice weekend

Maurice Yvonne January 17, 2015 at 7:49 AM This is beautifully written and oh so very romantic. What a perfect little poem this is. Congratulations on being chosen poem of the day. Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 7:53 AM Thank you Maurice...

Paul Callus January 17, 2015 at 7:33 AM Well done, Nadiya! This is beautiful and it flows warmly and effortlessly. Also a pleasure to read! #7 Have a lovely weekend. // paul Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 7:54 AM Thank you Paul... You too have a nice weekend..

Tim Smith January 17, 2015 at 5:12 AM Congrats Nadiya on being featured today...hugs Tim Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 5:20 AM Thank you very much Tim

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen January 16, 2015 at 11:06 AM A nice creation Nadiya,keep it up. Poesy Relish January 17, 2015 at 12:45 AM Thank you muhammad... Best wishes

Tim Smith January 15, 2015 at 3:56 PM very romantic piece... a first kiss...how wonderful...hugs Tim Poesy Relish January 15, 2015 at 11:52 PM Thank you tim... For taking time to read n comment... Blessings

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 15, 2015 at 7:42 AM Full of genuine honest emotions.Loved it .A fav. Perfect 10. Love>>>> rajat WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP Poesy Relish January 15, 2015 at 7:45 AM Thank you rajat, for the comment and warm welcome...