First Kiss

the stream trickles playfully over stones of grey & brown wild flowers in hues of purple sway gently in the breeze. the sun's rays mirror the water luminating a boy & a girl's silhouette quietly standing hand in hand eyes gleaming with excitement. his heart is racing; her cheeks aglow with only thoughts of each other wrapped in the warmth of their touch they simply know; they know. the boy slowly turns & faces his girl her smile so pretty, eyes only for him its her dimples that get to him every single time. as the stream trickles playfully wild flowers sway in the breeze he innocently kisses her pink flushed lips cherishing the moment of; love's very first kiss.

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2017 9:33:00 AM

I came back to savor this 'first kiss' once again, Lynn! It has lost none of its appeal. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 8:48:00 PM

Oh, I remember MY first kiss. It was so wonderful!! I love the part here where you repeat: they simply know; they know. And the dimples! a cute addition!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 8:47:00 PM

hello, dear. Gotta make this fast. Time to get off the internet. Thanks so very much for your comments. They are always so thoughtful! Now let me read this one of yours.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/19/2017 8:41:00 AM

You should have titled this one "First X" *lol*

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/19/2017 8:42:00 AM

I love this tale of discovery and innocence.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/16/2017 8:38:00 PM

Hi Lynn, the first kiss, i remember so well my first kiss. What an excellent write Lynn. You take us through the moment with such skill. You know how to hold and bring in your audience with such simple words Lynn. This is such a feel good piece. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

James Inman

Date: 9/7/2016 11:41:00 AM

Sweet Lynn. A special moment, a memory for you perhaps, I'm blushing.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2016 2:23:00 PM

- That was really sweet and lovely - Always remember the first kiss, Lynn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/28/2016 2:15:00 PM

Wonderfully crafted about first kiss. It's time to remember and make the memory green. Lol. Really nice, loved much. A beautiful 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/26/2016 9:13:00 AM

This is so sweet. There is nothing like a first kiss.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2016 8:15:00 AM

Your build up to that cherished moment is beautiful in its simplicity and there is a feeling of innocent young attraction. Love's very first kiss...a lasting memory! #7 Regards // paul