Lynn Marie Poet Free verse

First Kiss

the stream trickles playfully
over stones of grey & brown
wild flowers in hues of purple
sway gently in the breeze.

the sun's rays mirror the water
luminating a boy & a girl's silhouette
quietly standing hand in hand
eyes gleaming with excitement.

his heart is racing; her cheeks aglow
with only thoughts of each other
wrapped in the warmth of their touch
they simply know; they know.

the boy slowly turns & faces his girl
her smile so pretty, eyes only for him
its her dimples that get to him
every single time.

as the stream trickles playfully
wild flowers sway in the breeze
he innocently kisses her pink flushed lips
cherishing the moment of; love's very first kiss.

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Paul Callus August 22, 2017 at 9:33 AM I came back to savor this 'first kiss' once again, Lynn! It has lost none of its appeal. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2017 at 8:48 PM Oh, I remember MY first kiss. It was so wonderful!! I love the part here where you repeat: they simply know; they know. And the dimples! a cute addition!

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2017 at 8:47 PM hello, dear. Gotta make this fast. Time to get off the internet. Thanks so very much for your comments. They are always so thoughtful! Now let me read this one of yours.

Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2017 at 8:41 AM You should have titled this one "First X" *lol* Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2017 at 8:42 AM I love this tale of discovery and innocence.

Vladislav Raven March 16, 2017 at 8:38 PM Hi Lynn, the first kiss, i remember so well my first kiss. What an excellent write Lynn. You take us through the moment with such skill. You know how to hold and bring in your audience with such simple words Lynn. This is such a feel good piece. This has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

James Inman September 7, 2016 at 11:41 AM Sweet Lynn. A special moment, a memory for you perhaps, I'm blushing.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 30, 2016 at 2:23 PM - That was really sweet and lovely - Always remember the first kiss, Lynn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath August 28, 2016 at 2:15 PM Wonderfully crafted about first kiss. It's time to remember and make the memory green. Lol. Really nice, loved much. A beautiful 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Richard Lamoureux August 26, 2016 at 9:13 AM This is so sweet. There is nothing like a first kiss.

Paul Callus August 22, 2016 at 8:15 AM Your build up to that cherished moment is beautiful in its simplicity and there is a feeling of innocent young attraction. Love's very first kiss...a lasting memory! #7 Regards // paul