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First Kiss

His boyish charm; his arm around my shoulder; my fluttering heart.
His lips softly met mine, and in that long, smooth hot summer night’s kiss,
all that I’d longed for in my fourteen years suddenly blossomed.

For Line Gauthier's the 'Bite Size Poem no.5' Poetry Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 7/21/2013 12:17:00 PM

Hmmm...by the way where is GLEN some people below mentioned in their comments.Not found now in the poem.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/22/2013 11:16:00 PM

hmm, I wonder why I removed my tribute to Glen on this poem. Yes, he was the inspiration: a good old southern boy and son of a preacher man!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/23/2012 6:20:00 PM

Lucky you to have a GREAt first kiss! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/22/2012 1:04:00 PM

A lovely sijo. So much can be said in 3 short lines. Congratulations ona terrific kiss.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/22/2012 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 8/22/2012 9:35:00 AM

my warm and heartfelt CONGRATULATIONS on your win my dear friend, Andrea!!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/22/2012 3:59:00 AM

Congratulations my friend!...I gotta' look up this poetry form...looks like it's 3 lines, 8 meter verse?...Anyway, I like it! - Tim

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/22/2012 3:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andy you smoothy xx

Joseph May

Date: 8/21/2012 8:56:00 PM

very romantic ....congrats on your win Andrea

Katie Telling

Date: 2/6/2012 12:26:00 AM

This is so sweet! I absolutely love this poem :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2012 10:33:00 PM

How charming and romantic! Loved it. Best of luck in the contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2012 1:28:00 PM

Lovely tribute to Glen - wouldn't it be funny if he's a Soup member and read this!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/1/2012 9:35:00 PM

sweet....yup... good luck...pd

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/1/2012 5:20:00 PM

Nice write about a puppy love from the past. Good write Andrea. I've also sent you soup mail.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/1/2012 8:11:00 AM

Wow! This has a great flow to it (so I must be doing something wrong) I love blossom at the end :)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 1/31/2012 9:36:00 PM

You pictured the first kiss so well Andrea! How can one forget the "fluttering heart" the luv dav, luv dav, luv duv... I love this piece, you portrayed it so well! Your suggestions are well appreciated. Thanks for following my work. Love Dalila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/31/2012 8:28:00 PM

wow Andrea..we both began our kissing careers at a young age.. oh so fun to experience that first blush of luv captured in your lines my friend.. hope Glenn knows what he missed.. I know my ex sure does.. haha.. good luck luv..

Johnny Sumler

Date: 1/31/2012 7:23:00 PM

Wow what a lovely dedication written for this wonderful form. A fantastic entry Andrea and many thanks on commenting on my poetry. Been very busy with work, life, and most of all a heart-broken relationship! Gosh love sucks: )

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/31/2012 5:50:00 PM

what a cute entry for the contest andrea :-) but FOURTEEN YEARS!?!! I seem to recall kindergarten kisses, precocious haha

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/31/2012 3:30:00 PM

I forgot what I remember. Was it July or november. When she wooed me to the back seat of her car. I woke up in the morning, had forgot about the warning. That it's not polite for girls to go that far.

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/31/2012 2:54:00 PM

It sure will be a joyous day, Andrea. Who knows we could be neighbors. There's going to be a lot of people in the new earth and that's why there won't be any sea. I love your First Kiss poem - it is so sweet. I wish you well in Tracie's Contest. Luv, Maureen x

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/31/2012 2:44:00 PM

I just yahoooo'd you...check your email. G.

Tony Lane

Date: 1/31/2012 2:25:00 PM

I missed her lips on my first try. She won't let me forget it either.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/31/2012 2:12:00 PM

I could have used FEAT, YOU ARE RIGHT!! See, that's way you are the expert of words! I never even tho't of that one. ...Good luck in this contest, lady..Gwendolen