First Kiss

oscillating wings
caressing soft pollen tips
sugary nectar
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Sensual and spicy write on first kiss, Stephen
Pettit Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Very descriptive, but your first line has one too many syllables. A suggestion: how about replacing "flapping" with either "these" or "those"?
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