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First Kiss

oscillating wings caressing soft pollen tips sugary nectar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/24/2011 4:54:00 AM
Sensual and spicy write on first kiss, Stephen
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Date: 1/23/2011 7:36:00 PM
Very descriptive, but your first line has one too many syllables. A suggestion: how about replacing "flapping" with either "these" or "those"?
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