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First Kiss

Despite the cold and deadly winter we stand beneath an old umbrella outside the closed jeweler's shop in a deserted ugly winding street. I take off my gloves and hold your hand, so cold, so loveless, so helpless. Rub your elegant fingers, blow so softly my hot breath upon their frigid purple tips, that they might catch the warmth that I feel in my heart for you. As sleet and rain devour the earth, I look into your face notice your quicksilver smile, the twinkle in your greenish eye, the misty flare from chiseled nostrils. Slowly we retreat into the shop's recess hug each other in tender bliss, your cold slightly parted lips meet mine in a lingering kiss, we feel love's warmth enfolding our souls and holding fast we know we will not tempt fate that up to now had kept us cruelly apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/19/2020 12:54:00 AM
excellent poem shared and feeling good to read
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Date: 10/31/2020 6:40:00 AM
Beautiful Victor. Expressed quite vividly. Linda
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Date: 10/31/2020 5:49:00 AM
Hi Victor, You’ve created such a beautiful and romantic scene. It was a lovely sight to behold. I enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/30/2020 9:03:00 PM
A wonderful tale of warm romance, on a frigid winter's day. :)
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Date: 10/30/2020 3:28:00 PM
Very romantic words, Victor. I really enjoying reading this.
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:19:00 PM
so lovely and warm of heart a soul so much in love. Great imagery and feeling my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/30/2020 2:18:00 PM
A sweet romantic poem, hope for part II! hugs
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Date: 10/30/2020 12:54:00 PM
Hello Victor, oh this is such a romantic poem. i felt the love in your poem. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/30/2020 8:47:00 AM
I think we all remember our first kiss, but this poem is so tender such lingering kisses on soft lips, so warm, so real. Blessings and hugs my friend. Jennifer.
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Date: 10/30/2020 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful romance, Victor! She should not be loveless or helpless any more.
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Date: 10/30/2020 8:03:00 AM
Ahhh!! How romantic a work. Enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 10/30/2020 7:17:00 AM
So soft and yearning in tone, Victor:)
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Date: 10/30/2020 5:30:00 AM
You know how to set up the scene, Victor--great details, as always, that capture the reader into your storyline. Lovely write.
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Date: 10/30/2020 4:38:00 AM
Yes... Fate does that sometimes... I had to stay apart from my true love for years but am with him now and feel so amazed at the fullness of joy and love that is there. Your poem is a original that shines with genuine inspirations
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Date: 10/30/2020 3:36:00 AM
- A cold moment ... but still a lot of warmth that radiates between a couple who love each other ... a charming and beautiful poem, Victor:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/30/2020 3:19:00 AM
I still remember my first kiss, how sad when fate keeps two lovers apart...
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