First Kiss

Despite the cold and deadly winter
we stand beneath an old umbrella
outside the closed jeweler's shop
in a deserted ugly winding street.
 
I take off my gloves and hold your hand,
so cold, so loveless, so helpless.
Rub your elegant fingers,
blow so softly my hot breath
upon their frigid purple tips,
that they might catch the warmth
that I feel in my heart for you.
 
As sleet and rain devour the earth,
I look into your face
notice your quicksilver smile,
the twinkle in your greenish eye,
the misty flare from chiseled nostrils.
 
Slowly we retreat into the shop's recess
hug each other in tender bliss,
your cold slightly parted lips
meet mine in a lingering kiss,
we feel love's warmth  
enfolding our souls and holding fast
we know we will not tempt fate 
that up to now
had kept us cruelly apart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bangalee Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 12:54 AM
excellent poem shared and feeling good to read
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:40 AM
Beautiful Victor. Expressed quite vividly. Linda
Y. Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Hi Victor, You’ve created such a beautiful and romantic scene. It was a lovely sight to behold. I enjoyed what I saw:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 9:03 PM
A wonderful tale of warm romance, on a frigid winter's day. :)
Crabtree Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Very romantic words, Victor. I really enjoying reading this.
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 2:19 PM
so lovely and warm of heart a soul so much in love. Great imagery and feeling my friend. Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 2:18 PM
A sweet romantic poem, hope for part II! hugs
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 12:54 PM
Hello Victor, oh this is such a romantic poem. i felt the love in your poem. enjoy your day my friend.
Proxenos Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 8:47 AM
I think we all remember our first kiss, but this poem is so tender such lingering kisses on soft lips, so warm, so real. Blessings and hugs my friend. Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Beautiful romance, Victor! She should not be loveless or helpless any more.
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Ahhh!! How romantic a work. Enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Daniel Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 7:17 AM
So soft and yearning in tone, Victor:)
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 5:30 AM
You know how to set up the scene, Victor--great details, as always, that capture the reader into your storyline. Lovely write.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 4:38 AM
Yes... Fate does that sometimes... I had to stay apart from my true love for years but am with him now and feel so amazed at the fullness of joy and love that is there. Your poem is a original that shines with genuine inspirations
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 3:36 AM
- A cold moment ... but still a lot of warmth that radiates between a couple who love each other ... a charming and beautiful poem, Victor:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 3:19 AM
I still remember my first kiss, how sad when fate keeps two lovers apart...
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