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First In Flight

Like a guitar you play my heart Dictating every note every pause Do you know women so well or just me I rather feel like a blue imbecile You have bested me tested me Like a sad Sade love gone wrong song And you pull me like a string into dreams For me to wake and partake of rude reality You like the chase you like my face You like my lace and soft wet place But not forever you are so clever You drink me pleased like hot green tea and leave.

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Date: 10/22/2021 11:56:00 AM
Men are true animals, they buck and move on to the next one. It is in their genes. But where would literature be without women wishing men were different? Some well expressed sentiments in this one, Karen!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/22/2021 1:17:00 PM
Agreed. There are a few women who try to do this but men win hands down. Thanks for reading
Date: 10/21/2021 3:36:00 PM
Love lost? Always a popular subject.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/21/2021 3:39:00 PM
Yes or perhaps love not returned is more on point. lol

Book: Shattered Sighs