First Frost

Winter birches in stoles of rime
Shiver in the mist and gently chime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Nigel, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Found this astoundingly beautiful (3/29) as a "feature of the week" and here it is a "first round survivor" ... would have a hard time choosing between the two in the contest. Congratulations, Nigel and good luck in the contest!!
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 2, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Another honor for this poem. Congratulations on having two poems chosen as semi-finalists. Best wishes in the finals. Keep up the good writing. Karen
George   Avatar
April 1, 2009 at 7:55 PM
BREATHTAKING!!!! dear Nigel. I have seen and heard this and it is truly one of mother natures' finest magical treats. Good luck in the final round. lainie
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March 31, 2009 at 11:28 AM
wonderful image here!! Congratulations on making it through the first round! Good Luck!~Trudy~
Buys Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on having to poems in the finals. Well done and best wishes for the final round. Regards Heidie
Mason Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 12:17 PM
Awesome write, Nigel ... I'm not familar with this form and have to go check it out now ... smile ... this is truly remarkable and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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March 29, 2009 at 4:28 AM
Beautiful use of imagery to capture so much in just two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
P. Avatar
March 28, 2009 at 12:56 AM
the picture is just beautiful!! the shiver and the forst makes me want to be there inspite of the cold! lovely write... ~ Arany
Lopez Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 9:14 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 8:09 AM
Congrats Nigel on your crystalline "First frost" being featured. Vince
Townsend Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week.
Mckenzie Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Wonderful poem I love it! Congratulations on your being featured! Laura :)
Richards Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 11:01 AM
Beautiful poem in this short form! Congratulations on this featured work! ~ love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Fontes Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 8:42 AM
Simple and elegant. Congrats! Kirstie
Higgins Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 4:24 AM
Congrats on the feature.
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March 23, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Nigel.Rgds Brian
Winter Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 5:35 PM
Nigel, so beautiful! Where are you??? We miss you so much! Congratulations on your awesome featured write! Love, Shar
Wilson Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 4:45 AM
I'm finding inspiring winter poems here at Poetry Soup and this particularly speaks to me. I really like the way you depict the sound of winter.
Mckenzie Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 2:26 PM
what a beautful write about the frost !Laura :) I love your talent!
Mc Avatar
October 24, 2008 at 9:43 PM
cool this should be added to a Christmas song!!
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October 22, 2008 at 5:59 PM
Very naturistic and picuresque.:) Thanks for your kind comment on my poem---it brought me here to this piece that reminds me so much of how things are starting to look around my part of the world. I went out to my car early this morning, and my windows were frozen--imagine that! Best wishes, Sara
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October 22, 2008 at 4:09 PM
The season is upon us and will be freezing in a few days. I can see the images quite clearly. Hey, start the fire inside and get some hot chocolate going. Great job! ~Joseph
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