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First Frost

Winter birches in stoles of rime
Shiver in the mist and gently chime

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:52:00 PM

Nigel, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/27/2009 3:40:00 PM

Found this astoundingly beautiful (3/29) as a "feature of the week" and here it is a "first round survivor" ... would have a hard time choosing between the two in the contest. Congratulations, Nigel and good luck in the contest!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Date: 4/2/2009 4:37:00 PM

Another honor for this poem. Congratulations on having two poems chosen as semi-finalists. Best wishes in the finals. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 4/1/2009 7:55:00 PM

BREATHTAKING!!!! dear Nigel. I have seen and heard this and it is truly one of mother natures' finest magical treats. Good luck in the final round. lainie

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/31/2009 11:28:00 AM

wonderful image here!! Congratulations on making it through the first round! Good Luck!~Trudy~

Heidie Buys

Date: 3/30/2009 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on having to poems in the finals. Well done and best wishes for the final round. Regards Heidie

Sue Mason

Date: 3/29/2009 12:17:00 PM

Awesome write, Nigel ... I'm not familar with this form and have to go check it out now ... smile ... this is truly remarkable and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!

Date: 3/29/2009 4:28:00 AM

Beautiful use of imagery to capture so much in just two lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Arany P.

Date: 3/28/2009 12:56:00 AM

the picture is just beautiful!! the shiver and the forst makes me want to be there inspite of the cold! lovely write... ~ Arany

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/26/2009 9:14:00 AM

congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/26/2009 8:09:00 AM

Congrats Nigel on your crystalline "First frost" being featured. Vince

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/26/2009 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/25/2009 4:20:00 PM

Wonderful poem I love it! Congratulations on your being featured! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/25/2009 11:01:00 AM

Beautiful poem in this short form! Congratulations on this featured work! ~ love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/25/2009 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Kirstie Fontes

Date: 3/25/2009 8:42:00 AM

Simple and elegant. Congrats! Kirstie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/23/2009 4:24:00 AM

Congrats on the feature.

Brian Strand

Date: 3/23/2009 12:52:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week Nigel.Rgds Brian

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/22/2009 5:35:00 PM

Nigel, so beautiful! Where are you??? We miss you so much! Congratulations on your awesome featured write! Love, Shar

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/2/2008 4:45:00 AM

I'm finding inspiring winter poems here at Poetry Soup and this particularly speaks to me. I really like the way you depict the sound of winter.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 10/26/2008 2:26:00 PM

what a beautful write about the frost !Laura :) I love your talent!

Mc Mc

Date: 10/24/2008 9:43:00 PM

cool this should be added to a Christmas song!!

Sara Lokken

Date: 10/22/2008 5:59:00 PM

Very naturistic and picuresque.:) Thanks for your kind comment on my poem---it brought me here to this piece that reminds me so much of how things are starting to look around my part of the world. I went out to my car early this morning, and my windows were frozen--imagine that! Best wishes, Sara

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/22/2008 4:09:00 PM

The season is upon us and will be freezing in a few days. I can see the images quite clearly. Hey, start the fire inside and get some hot chocolate going. Great job! ~Joseph

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