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First Flowering of Spring

shades of black and white, the angels dance - lauded, first flowering of Spring. like a royal crown, the praisers go ‘round - the cherubim celebrate with flute, flag and gold harp. stirs, the thawing soil, the sunlight cheering with the scent of pine, potent chlorophyll and rain - the first sign of Spring endearing. a hope that lifts up mankind - God’s good will. primed petal pusher of butterfly nectaries — buzzing of snowdrop 3/24/2022 A combination of forms Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Crystalline- Kimo- Quatrain and Haiku form, in that order HMS 9/8/10/7/6/10/10/10/10/5/7/5

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Date: 3/27/2022 12:22:00 PM
THIS TAKES POETIC SKILL AND YOU SHOW US YOURS IN THIS SUPERB WRITE, COMBINING 3 POEMS AND MAKING ONE DELIGHTFUL ONE about spring. Good luck in the contest Kim. - sorry about caps. HUGS LOVE JENNIFER.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2022 2:18:00 PM
NO WORRIES ;) LOL…Thank you xoxo
Date: 3/26/2022 5:45:00 AM
Enjoyed this ode to spring in three different poetry forms--seamlessly executed. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2022 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 3/24/2022 3:06:00 PM
Lovely pen Kim, lovely touch of spring to look forward to. Blessings always,Gordon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2022 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon!

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