First Draft of Line Caren Collab

We met for real the other day. 
It was time for a sit down and we wanted to play.
Line, my first follower, and I.
We had a great time, I do not lie.

The first hurdle was, where do we meet?
The zoo? The planetarium or library so sweet?
We both love books, and we love to read.
So library it was, a great place indeed.

Shush! Shush! Said the librarian, old-school.
Be quiet now! She had the face of a orangutan.

Okay, Line, can we do anything with this, or shall
I start over and we can do faeries and gargoyles?
I need some imagery, and romantic words, and I know
you have them. Love, Caren PS Tag. You are it!

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Date: 5/11/2019 4:44:00 PM
I wish all my best to her, him and you, dear Caren) P.S.: But museum is good. Take it from me)
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Date: 5/11/2019 5:35:00 AM
It's also good to meet imaginary friends at a museum on Monday morning. Nobody, just you and him) Lovely poetry, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/11/2019 8:44:00 AM
Line is a she, and she was my first follower on Soup. So in case she reads this, I want to establish I also thought at first Line was a He. Not that it makes a bit of difference to me.
Date: 5/10/2019 3:09:00 PM
I hope one day I can meet some of the great people here "IRL" (stands for 'in real life') sounds like you two had a fun time!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2019 7:05:00 PM
In our imaginations, Michelle, but we both have them, and we have agreed to collaborate again for we had such a great time.
Date: 5/10/2019 1:18:00 PM
What a great experience for you both Caren. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2019 7:05:00 PM
I am so happy to say Line and I plan to actually meet Tom.
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