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First Day of Spring

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*Image of Beautiful Spring by APK.

First Day of Spring

Meadow
larks mesmerize
these longer days, as those
hibernates wake to furry hops
near verdancy, neath warmth of rays or rains,
newness absorbs a pass-over,
facing nature's depth midst
flower-patterned
meadow.

2023 January 15
Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of springs return
~~M. L. Kiser

*HMS.

Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2023

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Mahtab Bangalee Date: 1/28/2023 9:16:00 PM beautiful description of the spring time; nice to read; congrats Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/28/2023 9:51:00 PM Many thanks, Mahtab, for your supportive words and praise, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/28/2023 3:21:00 PM great images, my friend. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/28/2023 3:33:00 PM Thank you very much, Andrea, a bit of a hurdle this one, Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/28/2023 7:43:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Spring is on it's way. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day/weekend................ Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/28/2023 8:14:00 AM Difficult to know the contrasting seasons way out here, but 'Hooray!!!' is well known, Paula. Mahalo and Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/28/2023 6:55:00 AM So sweet and full of imagery. Nicely done William. Congratulations on your win! :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/28/2023 8:06:00 AM A tough format, Linda, short with a refrain and with your acknowledgment, I'm pleased, Aloha William