William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rictameter

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First Day of Spring

*Image of Beautiful Spring by APK.

First Day of Spring

Meadow
larks mesmerize
these longer days, as those
hibernates wake to furry hops
near verdancy, neath warmth of rays or rains,
newness absorbs a pass-over,
facing nature's depth midst
flower-patterned
meadow.

2023 January 15
Pen a Rictameter, Hopes of springs return
~~M. L. Kiser

*HMS.

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Mahtab Bangalee January 28, 2023 at 9:16 PM beautiful description of the spring time; nice to read; congrats William Kelii Kekaula January 28, 2023 at 9:51 PM Many thanks, Mahtab, for your supportive words and praise, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2023 at 3:21 PM great images, my friend. Congrats for your win. William Kelii Kekaula January 28, 2023 at 3:33 PM Thank you very much, Andrea, a bit of a hurdle this one, Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 7:43 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Spring is on it's way. Hooray!!! Have a blessed day/weekend................ William Kelii Kekaula January 28, 2023 at 8:14 AM Difficult to know the contrasting seasons way out here, but 'Hooray!!!' is well known, Paula. Mahalo and Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler January 28, 2023 at 6:55 AM So sweet and full of imagery. Nicely done William. Congratulations on your win! :) William Kelii Kekaula January 28, 2023 at 8:06 AM A tough format, Linda, short with a refrain and with your acknowledgment, I'm pleased, Aloha William