First Day

4AM, first day, someone grabbed my feet, turned me upside down, smacked my butt, shouted 7-3.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2023 8:31:00 PM

Whoa! At the time you were born, I guess that was the high-jump record! lol. Hilarious, once I got it, John. ~ Slow and Steady -- would prefer to be Fast and Lightning-Like

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2023 1:17:00 PM

A very creative/fun write. Guess you are awake. Now welcome to this crazy world. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/17/2023 12:37:00 PM

This has literally taken me all day and I've suddenly understood!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/17/2023 7:03:00 AM

... welcome to the world, John :) -